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jelp u havent lost ur touch with writen a great storie and i am sill loveing it and as u know keep me posted for the next chapter. I like how sauske is finaly learning that he had a life insted of revendge and of course it is with naruto . so let me know when the next chapter is done

You. Are. AMAZING! I love how you write, there aren't too many adjectives, and the tone isn't too serious or too light - it's so perfect. It's incredible how you can switch from Naruto's thoughts and speech and Sasuke's voice so smoothly. Your chapters never disappoint. My favourite lines were Sasuke telling Naruto to go back to bed so he could jerk off. Can't wait to see how the events play out! Thanks for updating!

You. Are. AMAZING! I love how you write, there aren't too many adjectives, and the tone isn't too serious or too light - it's so perfect. It's incredible how you can switch from Naruto's thoughts and speech and Sasuke's voice so smoothly. Your chapters never disappoint. My favourite lines were Sasuke telling Naruto to go back to bed so he could jerk off. Can't wait to see how the events play out! Thanks for updating!

*reads and now types review while laying against desk. Feverish, hacking and coughing up a lung to the point of getting violently ill* I so feel your pain of being sick. I hope you get well soon . . . I will probably be well after the spring thaw. Thank you for sending me the email about the chapter being up. Great chapter, loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. Seems there is more going on inside of him then just Sasuke's soul hitching a ride. I'm really interested to see what your going to do with this twist. And now they have found Naruto's favorite snake. I'm sure she will stay close to Naruto from now on. Wow, what was that dream all about and was it just a dream? Just what is he warning Naruto against? Well, sorry if this review is shorter and not as in depth. Too sick and too much med's to think too clearly. Thanks for the update and the email again. Keep up the good work, take care.

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Thanks for the new chapter!!! I'm glad the snake is back. When she says that she doesn't think it was Sasuke's body, does that mean that Sasuke's body is still around somewhere and Sasuke can get it back? That would be wonderful!!! I hope that was what she meant. :)

"Okay, I’ll tell him then. Sasuke, you're an asshole," Dokueki paused before taking a deep breath and yelling, "YOU LEFT ME ALL ALONE IN A BIG SCARY FOREST WITHOUT WARM NARUTO!!"

Yeah! You tell him girlfriend!!

-Damp *I must say, Dokueki is my favorite character in this whole fic. She's so funny the way she keeps referring to Naruto as 'Warm Naruto'.*

"I realized my mistake as soon as I came into contact with the ramen package that it clearly wasn't you."- I burst out laughing at this point! It was so hilarious. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I was expecting in this chapter because of the title for someone to believe Naruto but think that if Naruto was telling the truth then Sasuke was up to something evil or it wasn't really Sasuke or something. But it was great! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Maybe someone will finally listen? I'm glad Dokueki is back! I hope the next chapter comes out soon!

more ch please too much waiting

u did a great job jelp and i was hoping u did a seen when sasuke jurked off in narutos body. so keep up the good work and let me know when the next chapter is out and ur new stories

I sooo want to make a fanart of Naruto waking up with fox ears and tails! X3, he must look so cute!!!
Nice chapter, especially the jerking off bit!