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for Territorial

by Hedder

person Eremi22
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chick, where have you been!?!?
You've been away forever!

You really can't just leave a story that rocks like this
hanging without any word you know, it kills the fans.

Even if life simply reared it's ugly, pessimistic head,
just let us know so we can semi-patiently lie in wait.

If you just forgot, well then, there isn't much of an excuse.

No matter whatthe reason though, you should repent by updating!
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!!
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really really gooD!!!! please continue i love iruka as uke!!!!
person sethian
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you fic! really wow! Each time you update I reread the whole thing and I love it as much as the first time! I hope you'll uptade soon, your story has a lot of potential!!!
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

I am so happy to see this come back with an update! I love the sexual tension in this story; you really do an absolutely delicious job with it and with the misunderstandings and awkward moments and meddling family... I "had" to reread it all, and laughed and stayed up a bit too late... slap-fights over the top of bathroom stalls, anyone? Rancid puppy breath? Yes, thank you! :D
I mean... YAY. And the ending scene (shower, Kiba torture, amusement at Kiba torture, subtle submission, making out, and interruption!) was my favorite. :D

Thank you!
person Stacy
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this has to be the most addicting story i have ever read!! i really like how you portray kiba in this story. i don't know a lot about dogs but i like how you explained everything. please don't make us fans wait to long for the next upate!!!
person ree
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!! love the update!! =) great job! i love Iruka and Kiba pairing..sadly not much out there to read. *sigh*
SMEXY time!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoot!!! update lol loved it and cant wait for the next one =)
person silentnight
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the tension and build up. sooooooooooooo hot!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! a new chapter! such a sweet forbidden fruit kind of story. Part of me is with Iruka's reasoning. Iruka was Kiba's teacher, how can he think of kiba as anything other than a student and yet, kiba is now an adult, and a handsome scoundrel at that! How torn poor Iruka is. How greatly written this story is an amazing story that just pulls me in. I Love it.