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for Territorial

by Hedder

person Eremi22
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the last part the most I think. Now there isn't any way Iruka can hide all of the marks unless he wears his hair down. It made me giggle uncontrollably. I'm looking forward to your next update quite a bit!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heeheh. Those two make me giggle. Nice job, once again. Thanks for the update, as well. Looking forward to the next bit. ^_^
person sollerine
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!! This is the most unusual pairing, but I seriously can't get enough of it! Please and most definately continue!!!!!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorites. I'm glad you're back. ^__^

They are such an interesting pair, especially with all the canine behaviors thrown in. Kiba is a stressed-out mess and poor Iruka doesn't know what to do next.

Thanks for the new chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next one.
person drivven
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! I really wanted to see this one finished. I love this pairing! You actually inspired me to these two. It was a co-author with a friend, but I wrote the IruKiba. (yeah Iruka seme is odd, but it was fun) I really hope you update soon hon. I love this story line. -dancing in the chair- Woot!
person Eremi22
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update!!! Please? I really like this story...
person ree
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! I love this story!! =) I love the fact that Kiba and Iruka has a cat and mouse game going on. Hehehehe, Kiba is in denial and won't admit that he is so in love with Iruka. I can't wait for more!! We just have to see where their relationship goes. I hope it ends well. Thank you for writing this story. Please update soon!! Ganbatte!

-Ree
person Nickname
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

I hope you update soon!

- PP
person Anon
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man i love this story! And I tend to HATE crack fics and couples. Yet I find myself flipping back and forth between checking ur Y!Gallire and ur aff acount, trying to get to an update sooner. Thats.... kinda sad lol. I love the thought of Iruka in a dog collar. I wonder how our dog boy is going to make up for this messup?? Hummm? Well heres yo hoping I find out soon. **Hint Hint** Pretty Please update again!