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for Territorial

by Hedder

person toki
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when is the next chapter coming? CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Finally an update and what an awesome one it was!! Great stuff!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Nickname
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, this was well worth the wait.

I can't wait to see where this is gonna go.

Kiba is so screwed over.
person hina88
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man this is so fucking hot >.< I really really like this and I never EVER considered this pairing before but you're making it work for me. That last chapter just felt so climatic to me, i think yo built the tension incredibly well and left me on a damn cliffie >.< (felt like one). I can totally understand where iruka's coming from. He didn't ask for what happened and ended up getting marked, he just had an attraction for Kiba but that seemed to be all but he's taking it all quite well and going with it, trying to make the best of it but ^_^;;; KIba *shakes head* well I suppose its his instincts too but he just made his life harder by telling Iruka that he couldn't make promises and whatnot, it would've pissed me off too.

Anyway, I think they're both in character and loved Genma XD hehe and I loved that you showed iruka's prankster side, it's easy to forget that Iruka used to be a prankster but i like the way you've infiltrated that back into his character. Really nice. It's been a logn time since a new fic on aff.net got me so excited. Can't wait to read more!

Hina xXxx
person Timberfox
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the pairing and the story. There's a nice blend of lust and humor mixed into the story. I liked the part with Pakkun noting that he's a top. Alpha!Kiba is hot and I'm glad that Iruka took the initiative with the collar. Hopefully, they'll be able to get together without killing each other (lol). I also like Hana, Tsume, and Akamaru's helping hands even if Tsume's helping hand often forms a punch for Kiba. I'm lookng forward to seeing how Raidou will impact the couple in the future. Genma/Kakashi is an interesting side pairing.
person Ivy
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good! I love Kiba ^_^ Also I like all the detail you put into the mating rituals; great job!
person toki
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWSOOOOMMMME!!!!!!!!!!
person drivven
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I am soo glad I got on here tonight! I have been watching and waiting for this update. I love this story, please continue, very very soon! *hugs*
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....whoa.
This is one sexy, SEXY trainwreck. o_o Kiba's pretty much firetrucked, but wow, is it pretty to watch.
person sethian
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Awe-SOme!!

I absolutely adore it! I'm addicted to your fic! I hope you've got more in mind! It's only beginning to get interesting! :o)