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for Territorial

by Hedder

person tovah
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree that review was uncalled for. I think the most important thing about any fic is if it is entertaining or not. I happen to find yours to be very much fun and entertaining. I look forward to more chapters, so keep writing despite what this jerk had to say.
person KaraQ
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better. XD More please! *Dangles a bone over your head* Be a good girl, and write some more. ^^

~KaraQ
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that bastard would say such terrible about your beautiful story. I agree whole heartedly with Dom. I have enjoyed your story for the first paragraph the the most resent. I think the attraction between Iruka and Kiba is sweet, they both realize they is a age difference and have there inner battles with it. I think you have covered this story very well, and what the hell it's your right as a fanfic author to write what make you happy, not what make that 'chicken shit' who wrote you that e-mail get off. I love your story and I thank you for sharing it with all of us. Anyhow read ya later here or at y gallery were I'm Dragonsbane. Lot of love and encouragement to you.
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ugh at first i thought this was a kiba/naru story, please put that its an kiba/iruka story in the summary, *shudder* did not need to get that picture in my head
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story!! I can't wait to see where it goes! REally can't wait until you update! But, do take your time. It's your story, don't let us rush you!
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I like your keen observation on dog behavior and how you applied them to humans. One of my favorites now ~ can't wait for more! =D
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Someone is in very big trouble. Kiba is going to need several layers of flak vests when his mother gets hold of him. Still nicely done, though you might want to give it one more look for typos. I found a couple, though it isn't anything earth-shattering. Keep up the good work.

^_^
person cynaga
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fanfuckintastic! Can't wait for more. Great pacing - unique pair. Always love to know more about the Inuzukas. Thanks!
person Shiola
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet again you deliver an amazing chapter! please update soon!
person sethian
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic is Awesome!!! dear Kiba is so sexy in it!! You have to keep up writing it, the story has so much possiblities! I'm looking forward to reading it!