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for Territorial

by Hedder

person janas
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love dis story...
update soon!!!
your chapters are really long yet i seem to want more
person tovah
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is Soooooo Good!!! I can not wait for another chapter. I think the pairing is cute, one you don't see very often But when fics like this come along it makes you glad someone thought of it. Please update soon I'll be waiting.
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I've never even thought about these two getting together before but I'm dying to see them finally get together in this. Please update soon!
person J. Hoshi
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice and funny! Mathmaticall equations, good distraction though!
person charmpit
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Jiminy Cricket! Kiba and Iruka? Hell, Genma and Kakashi?! You got brand-new on all of us, sweetheart. You should be pleased with yourself.

This is definitely one for the recommended reading list. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, whatever you do do NOT abandon this fic!
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Fourth chapter! I've been waiting for this, Akamaru is amazing in this story, you really give him the type of personality I always thought he'd have.
person leanne
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally awsome! I love Iruka and Kiba is just so damned sexy! more please.
person ruinedkuria
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
F-ing hot! And an interesting pairing to boot. *flails* Can't wait to read more.
person Nickname
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Things certainly are progressing.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

~ PP
person Rose
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story is one of the best i have read in a long time. Please write some more I was instantly hooked, and need to know what happens between them. Keep up the good work.