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for Territorial

by Hedder

person J. Hoshi
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very funny chapter it kept me laughing! And in the end I was like yeah! For the marking part I wonder what will happen in the next chapter!
person Jessii
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!! ^_^
cant wait till you update...i hope its soon
person Vex
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please continue!
I *need* more Kiba/Iruka, I *need* to know all the smuty fun that's about to happen.
person cynaga
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I love Kiba and this pairing is fresh and exciting. Your writing is wonderful and your characters just cannon enough to be familiar and just new enough to be exciting.

more, more --- PLEASE~!
person eve4mem
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There are no words for such awesomeness. It's all so great and that bit towards the end was hot. Can't wait for more ^_^
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good, I can't fair for the next chapter!
person janas
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
iruka and kiba
gotta say the pairing has grown on me
love da story
there's nothing better than an agreesive alpha male
update soon
person Shiola
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really really good, please update soon.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love Akamaru. And boy does Tsume need to learn how to be just a little more tactful...but then again, is there really any nice, easy way of asking those kinds of questions? Meh. Anyhow, still nicely done. ^_^
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a first, but good! I totally love that Kiba is sexually frustrated and in the first chapter I was like who is Him? I was at the edge of my seat until I found out who it was. I've been dieing to find out who it was! Nice job and hope to read more soon!