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for Territorial

by Hedder

schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. This has so much potential! A rather strange pairing to me, but no to far out. Please keep going.
person lonlydove
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update this soon. i really like it ^_^
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kept me giggling through both of the first chapters. Very well done, I must say. No typos or anything, which is awesome. My favorite character is turning out to be the dog. Odd that no one really ever tries to give the mutt any personality, but you managed to do so very easily, and with a great hand that makes it look easy for a dog to be funny. All in all, nicely done.

^_^

a/j
person i_banquet
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story!...with an unusual couple :)
Hope you'll update soon
person cynaga
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story - nice pace. Can't wait for more. Thanks!
person eve4mem
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I love this so much. It just so happens I was thinking about this fic just yesterday. I couldn't remember where I read it and I was hoping a new chapter would be added soon so I could refind. So thank you very much for helping me not lose such a great fic. I'm putting it under my faves so I never lose it again. Can't wait for more ^_^
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it holy sh*t this is so much fun. I am so in love with Kiba
person KaraQ
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting pairing. ^^ Well-written too. I hope you update soon.

~KaraQ
person Nickname
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. So cute. I can't wait to read more. Update soon. =]
person ALD
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen this pairing before. I like it! Nice first two chapters. Update soon!