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for Little Drummer Boy

by MoveThemHands

person noezel7
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was actually wondering about this story the other day! I'm so glad you decided to pick it up again. I love thinking about Sasuke with a southern gentlemen's accent...SO SEXY!! Anyway, this chapter was great. It really is nice to know that Sasuke does return Naruto's feelings at least. Not too sure about Itachi though. I mean, does he want to get all his men killed? Hopefully Sasuke can keep Naruto out of this one! Hope to hear more from you soon!!
person Autumn
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing. don't ever think that we'd thing something like this is stupid. it's beautiful. it's completely original. it's...i don't know how else to describe it. i'm pleasantly shocked.
person MewMew2
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started this story today and I must say, definitely a unique and intriguing choice of setting for an AU. Please update this as soon as you are able to do so. Although strange it is also a very good piece of writing and I would love to read more. If this piece were to have an accompanying soundtrack, I believe that 'Hands held high' by Linkin Park would definitely be on that soundtrack. It may sound random but that song has been playing in my mind since I started reading this........
person noezel7
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you posted a new chapter! I thought this one had died and I was a little sad at that thought. I love that Naruto isn't the only one who is confused by his feelings. But poor Sasuke! First he gets shocked by his brother showing up and then he starts to have feelings for a boy he just met! AND IN THE MIDDLE OF A WAR!! I love that you have their manerisms of speech match up with the time period. It allows the reader to be even more immersed into the world you are creating. Keep up the good work and I hope to see a new chapter soon!!
person littleolmee
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah I remember this story! I haven't seen it in a while, missed the previous chapter you put out. Great updates, I really enjoy how you present the chapters; you make it seem so real almost like you are their beside them. Interesting twists already with Itachi. Liked how the whole thing isn't lost on Sasuke, he is feeling the same emotions as Naruto is dealing with. I hope you stick with it, I'd love to see what you have in mind for them.
person SpacePirateDoll
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I love the idea for this fic!
So original, its action-packed and emotional TT_TT

Conviently, I'm studying the Civil War right now xD

I can't wait to read more!!
Please don't lose confidence, you have writing skills; put them to use =3

Poor little Naruto, I feel bad for him~

Please update soon!
Cliffies can be the death of a fangirl Dx
Oh noes, lol xD
person noezel7
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again I think you did a fine job with potraying the characters. It was also nice to get Sasuke's point of view of the battle. I never expected Itachi to show up or for Sasuke to kill one of his own family. I hope poor Naruto doesn't get hurt or emotionally scared because he likes another male. Anyway, hope you keep up with this story and have a Merry Christmas!!
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay... you're right. You should enjoy writing Sasuke POV because it was awesome. You SO have his number. Of course, I'm all beside myself because I don't understand why Sasuke said Itachi... did he see him? Reliving memories? What! (grabs you by the shirt, shakes you) Tell me! When I write, I put in a lot... A LOT... of cliffhangers, they make me giggle (sadistic I know) but, now, after this... I hate them! Can't wait for more.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I missed this story and your update did not disappoint! First, your writing style is amazing. I find myself mildly jealous, actually. Easy to read, highly descriptive and extremely engaging. Crap, I may have said that before, but dammit, it's still true.
And oh my god, poor little Naruto. The cleaning and sewing of the wounds... OUCH! I'm not sure even a 'beautiful' captain would make that okay. As always, I adore Sasuke and Naruto in this.
As far as your questions... I'm totally okay with vague references to where and who they are. I took US History in high school and college, I can fill in the blanks... what I can't fill in is SasuNaru moments of gooey, yummy joy!
Oh, and I'd love a chapter in Sasuke's POV, with your writing, I can't wait to see how he "thinks".
Looking forward to more!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm intrigued by this concept (i like war fics for whatever reason) so curious to see where it's gonna go :D