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I'm so glad that you posted this! It's rare to get an original concept such as this one! Even though the characters are out of their usualy habitat, their personalities are still intact and I know how hard it is to do. I will continue to read this story no matter what and I love you for your guts to post something so different! Keep up the good work!!

Well, we know how I feel about Naruto as a drummer boy, so now let's chat about how HOT I think Captain Uchiha is. This chapter was so awesome. I love the caring, gentle Sasuke. (But only with Naruto... with everyone else he can be his teme self.) Sigh. I do feel REALLY bad for Naruto and that needle though. I hope Sasuke has something really nice planned.

Ah you updated the story, thank you so much for doing so. Loved the second chapter. When Sasuke showed hints of jealousy and then shame at his previous feelings when Shika came in was one of my favorite parts from ch 2. It's interesting that you made Shika, Naruto's brother. While I've seen AU's where some of the characters are related I've never seeing those two presented as being related; I think I like it. My other favorite was Sasuke going behind Naruto to steady him for the doctor to sew up his wound, hints of feelings there. Glad you will be sticking with this story and doing more with it. I'll pray for many nights full of rest for you, same I hope for myself but seldom get *sigh* but, maybe it will work for you. I'll keep an eye out for more from you, keep up the good work and take care.

littleolmee
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review replies yea! (though if I were your friend Rachael and as you are into yaoi, you've been keeping secrets from me, yesh, yesh). anywho, I adored the new chapter. I think there's something fantastic about your details. The text is really invigorated. What I mean to say is that it would probably take me three times as long to say what you said in this chapter. I would have had to hash out all the details of the history of Shika and Naru, then I would have had to refine that down into a brief remembrance, and yet you did all that and more with an ambiguous three to four sentences. (curseyou) But hey, I like good writing and I like good stories. I like how you are handling everything so far and I can't wait for more. Thank you for the new chappie!

Very inspiring. I love your writing. See.. no joking here. It wasn't depressing actually. I thought it was very insightful to how it would be to be in the front lines. Those guys have to be really brave there. You nailed it. Now, if only I have a few of those guys working with me... keep on writing. I love it. *hugs*

Well it is an interesting idea to do a story on. Will there be more chapters? I'd like to read more, to see what you got in mind for this story. Thanks for posting, take care.

So good. Will there be more? I hope so. Awesome descriptions, I loved your Naruto. He could so do the drummer boy roll for sure. In a way that the roll he plays in manga... charging in, often unprepared, making sure everyone keeps doing what there supposed too and smiling the whole time.

I started reading this story on TONFA! But then I couldn't find it anymore and was very sad :( I thought I had lost it!!! I'm so happy to see that you decided to post it here....and hopefully continue the story...I remember the last chapter I read was ch6. Although I won't mention anything else, just in case I happen to accidently spoil any of the oncoming storyline. Yay! Well then I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

-Jenn

no dying laughing for you. You have another chapter to post. yes, yes.