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"if you think sex is a pain in the ass, you're doing it wrong."

"kinky or perverted? kinky you use a feather, perverted you use the whole chicken."

OMFG soooo HOT!! I LOVED it!! Although I do have some dissatisfaction.....mainly you left Gaara all alone in Suna to have afairs with others XD NOT COOL!!! They should totally work something out like using that chakra network (since Naruto has so much chakra he could jutsu him and Sasuke to Suna everyweek when they aren't on missions....or Tsunade could have them both transfered to Suna as a show of good faith and the connection of the Leaf and Sand villiages....) well that's how I end it anyways....much happier and Gaara isn't left as still an outcast. Well keep up the good work, I'll look forward to your next piece.

Ok that was absolutely fantastic, my only problem was with the EXCESSIVE use of the words, (zinging, twanging, zingzongidy) and any others like them, seriously used waaaaaay too much. Other than that this was utterly fantastic, keep up the good work and update soon.

Wow... just, wow... So far I have read 11 chappies at once... finally gave in to the urge to review and tell you what a truly awesome writer you are!

that was so frecken hot i cant say anything eles so let me know when the next chapter is done

A very satisfying ending, I really liked everything you wrote. Thank you so much for clearing up the claws and eating thing from my last review, I really do appreciate it. Overall this story is a ten, it is maybe a little shorter than I would have liked but isn't that the way it always is, the stories that you really like are always too short and the stupid ones seem to go on forever! Well I really liked it in any case.

This is a great story! I can't wait to read more, so update soon please!

*Slow, soft evil laughter gently rises from the dark corner of the computer lab* hehehehe... smut... hehehehehehe. Ooooooo... I loved it! ALOT! You updated and I could not ask for a better chapter... Poor Temari, scared for life... best throw Shikamaru/or other sexy bishounene her way to ... distract her. I was very happy with the three-way lemon. One chapter is far to long for these three to be inactive. Pity that Tsunade had to interrupt their fun... Jiraya seemed a bit traumatized too. (Kakashi just might get a surprise when he picks up the next book of Icha Icha Paradise.) I actually think that Tsunade was too focused on the negatives at this point (though I don't blame her what with everyone expecting a mass invasion and ending up with I.I.P. Yaoi smut- Live action version) but when you think about it- The Future Hokage, the present Kazekage and the most powerful Leaf ninja doing the horizontal tango, you couldn't imagine a better scenario for an alignment.

And I must say that as Far as I could tell, any and all previous questions have been nicely answered. However, new question. Will Naruto and Sasuke be able to use the inter-village chakara lines in case of *ahem* emergencies. 'Cause you know they have the chakara reserves for it.

It's very sad however that this story is ending... ... ... Dare I pray for a sequel?... ... ... Dare I ask if I could help write a sequel? ... ... ... ^O.O^ *Intensive Dragon Stare of Doom* ... please?

Eagerly anticipating next chapter!
BDQ

great chapter I hope that I get to read more soon

Great chapter. Thank you for answering my questions. The answers you had make sense. I can't wait for more. It is kind of sad that this will be ending so soon. Till next chapter.