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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love, LOVE this story. Your writing style is absolutely wonderful, especially your descriptions. Please keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I love this chapter! Look out Gaara! Our lil blonde nin is heading straight for you. Prepare yourself! I so can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not all that great at reviewing, but I wanted to let you know that I am reading and enjoying. I hope you decide to continue.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, it's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea, and I think you are one of the better writers of 'Heat' fics, just update soon please.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, i liked this chapter!
I actually like the whole story. It's hot and sexy. You have a way with words when it comes to writing the heat, you can almost feel the erratic heartbeat and desperation that Naruto's suffering.
Looking forward to more. :)
I actually like the whole story. It's hot and sexy. You have a way with words when it comes to writing the heat, you can almost feel the erratic heartbeat and desperation that Naruto's suffering.
Looking forward to more. :)
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I just wish the chapters were a bit longer. I hope you keep updating. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm..I like this twist! going to Gaara is a fabulous idea! I can't wait ^-^
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the turn of events here! Keep going please
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I have one suggestion since I haven't seen it cleary stated. Who is the seme? Me I perfer NaruAnyone. I like my Naruto seme. So I'm suggesting that you have Naruto seme. Anyway. Fabulous story and keep updating.