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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a very amusing story, good job so far
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dani-sama, another excellent if melancholy chapter. Thank you. How will things change back at home?
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats was awsome so let me know when the next chapter is done and is sasuke and naruto going to go public about there relationship
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, its almost over. This story is so entertaining. ^^
I wonder how the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke is going to change now that they're officially sorta mated. :P Hopefully Gaara will be able to join the fun more than just every 2-3 months. ;)
I wonder how the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke is going to change now that they're officially sorta mated. :P Hopefully Gaara will be able to join the fun more than just every 2-3 months. ;)
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Not really a review, more of a threat to the general reading public)
Hello? *pokes at screen* Where are all the readers? was there a mass extinction somewhere that I totally slept through?
Kallipso: *rubs eyes* Huh? what? Final.... must... finish... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
BDQ: *Blinks* Okay, that's actually normal...
Where are all the reviewers? I KNOW YOU'RE OUT THERE! I CAN HEAR YOU BREATHING! I WILL EAT YOU IF YOU DON'T REVIEW! YOU DO READ THIS STORY! I KNOW YOU DO! REVIEW DANG IT! WE MUST HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER! IT IS IMPERATIVE THAT I HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Kallipso: Why is it so darn important?
BDQ: NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!
Kallipso: *Rolls eyes* Oh, now I get it. Demon withdrawals. Whatever... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
BDQ:*Rocking in a corner* MUST HAVE THE LEMON! NOW! *starts muttering* threesomes. must have my threesomes... *Snaps out of it* We only need 2 --TWO-- more reviews you lazy bunch. So get with they typing! Are your keyboards broken or what? I really love this story and if you can not tell already, I WANT MORE IF IT! SO REVIEW!
To Dani~: Now THAT ought a do it! Please keep writing so when the next two reviews pop up *waves giant two bladed ax towards huddling mass of readers*, you can post right away.
Kallipso: Yeah! and I promise I won't sleep through it... *collapses onto class notes* Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
*Glares at readers again* REVIEW!
Happy writing!
BDQ and a snoring Kallipso
Hello? *pokes at screen* Where are all the readers? was there a mass extinction somewhere that I totally slept through?
Kallipso: *rubs eyes* Huh? what? Final.... must... finish... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
BDQ: *Blinks* Okay, that's actually normal...
Where are all the reviewers? I KNOW YOU'RE OUT THERE! I CAN HEAR YOU BREATHING! I WILL EAT YOU IF YOU DON'T REVIEW! YOU DO READ THIS STORY! I KNOW YOU DO! REVIEW DANG IT! WE MUST HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER! IT IS IMPERATIVE THAT I HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Kallipso: Why is it so darn important?
BDQ: NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!
Kallipso: *Rolls eyes* Oh, now I get it. Demon withdrawals. Whatever... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
BDQ:*Rocking in a corner* MUST HAVE THE LEMON! NOW! *starts muttering* threesomes. must have my threesomes... *Snaps out of it* We only need 2 --TWO-- more reviews you lazy bunch. So get with they typing! Are your keyboards broken or what? I really love this story and if you can not tell already, I WANT MORE IF IT! SO REVIEW!
To Dani~: Now THAT ought a do it! Please keep writing so when the next two reviews pop up *waves giant two bladed ax towards huddling mass of readers*, you can post right away.
Kallipso: Yeah! and I promise I won't sleep through it... *collapses onto class notes* Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
*Glares at readers again* REVIEW!
Happy writing!
BDQ and a snoring Kallipso
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter I can't wait for more
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story so far. I'm glad you went back and made adjustment for the claws and food issue. That was bothering me a little. But hey, this is fantasy we are talking about so I didn't care. If I like the story line I can live with a few events being unrealistic. Anyway I look forward to your next chapter. You may have already answered this but how many chapters will this story have?
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah that was awsome i hope u keep this going for a long time i realy like it so keep it going. If you can let me know when the next chapter is done
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKK! OMG! I loved it! WAI! Oh man, Jiraya and the others are going to FLIP when they realize just what exactly was going on in the shinny bubble of Love... ^0______~^ Oh, oh! Poor Temari, she found them naked... wait... LUCKY Temari, she got to see them naked! Oh man, *laughs* that was so funny! Oh and I can't WAIT for Tsunade to finally talk with Naruto. She is going to be so PISSED that she's getting all this grief from the other villages and it was just demon/teenage hormones~! I think Neji's going to have a nose bleed when he finds out just what the three were doing! *Busts out laughing* Oh wow! Loved it~! Loved it~! Loved it~! So like they're now "Soul mates"? Kinda? Chakara Mates? well whatever, they're 3 of the most powerful Ninja's getting laid regularly, I pity any fool who dared attack them... and will pay any one handsomely for any film they may have gotten. Well I'll say that that was One way to get a watertight alliance with Sand. Take the Kazekage, the future Hokaga and throw in one sexy Bishi for good measure and watch the sparks fly! And I loved the explanation with Kyuubi. I feel so sorry for him all alone in his cage... I Just want to run up and give him a big cuddle... well... maybe not... big teeth... possible plushy chew toy... *stares at current winter coat...* no. I'll just toss him a stake possibly the whole cow. Anyway my One and Only question. So with the fact that now they have to be together once a month how exactly will that work? I can see Sasuke being made Naruto's "Personal Body guard" and accompanies Naruto on his monthly "negotiations" with Gaara... ^o_________o^
Please Update soon! PLEASE! ((To the world of readers: REVIEW! Or I'll Let Kyuubi out! I'm a dragon, we have that kind of power you know!))
Happy Writing! BDQ
Please Update soon! PLEASE! ((To the world of readers: REVIEW! Or I'll Let Kyuubi out! I'm a dragon, we have that kind of power you know!))
Happy Writing! BDQ