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Woah! Another steamy sex amoung friends, at least they were all thinking clearly. OMG, will they get caught?

OMG that was HOT!!!! you should really leave it at Sasu/naru/gaa and no others in their odd relationship. I love having it just the three of them. so hot!!! Update again soon!!!

First of all I love what you have written so far and although there are a few small things that bothered me (claws when preping their passages, not eating or drinking especially in the desert and with all the fluids they are expending *snickers* ^^) they are very, very minor details on the whole. It is very entertaining, fun and smutty which is obviously the idea. Anyone who gets so caught up in the small stuff isn't really a good sport about the whole fanic thing. I have only one actual complaint (and it is only because he is my fav character) that poor, pretty, tortured(read: Emo) Neji gets no demon lovin'. And so while I would love for him to make it a quartet I get that it probably isn't in your plan and so that's cool too. I really like what you've done so far and look forward to future chapters.

Wow that was awsome..hot and very well written! do u do email alerts for new chapters?

that was amasing i was wating for that i figured that soner or later they would have to stop but i dident think that sasuke would join them and help them cam down that was awsome. SO let me know when the next chapter is done thak you........... ^-^

The GaaSasuNaru lemon was hot!!! So their heat is over now? I wonder if anyone else will find out what they've been up to? Thanks for the new chapter!

Hehehehehehehe... I guess it was the Uchiha that broke the camel's back. ^^ I'm gonna laugh my ass off if Sasuke ends up pregnant. >:) (Not that I'm encouraging that, but it would be funny as hell.)

I can't wait to see what the morning after conversation consists of. It would probably be awkward as hell, once Sasuke realizes that he belongs to two demons. Although, after all that continuous sex, I would be surprised if Gaara and Naruto didn't need a week to sleep it off.

Keep up the good work! Can't wait until the next installment~!

Huzzah... Well that certainly was fun. o_O

Oh, what are they going to find? Three sleeping boys? How will this change them?

VERRY HOT!!! UPDATE SOON!!!