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for Demon Winds

by Blckthorn

schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BWAAAAAAAAAAA...........
[jaw drops and an unsightly amount of drool drips off the readers chin]
person kallipso
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! I love this chapter. Interesting that adding Sasuke to the mix was just what was needed to finish their heat. Please keep it coming.
person KyuubiTamer
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(clamps hand to stop the nosebleed) That was so freakin' hot with the steamy threesome sex! Keep it up! =^ ^ =
person Nanaka
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOO!LOVE IT! MORE PLS!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude...that is seriously some hot stuff you are writing there. It is sooo delicious. And I was reading it during class can you imagine the face I would have had the whole time!? please...the next chapter must be soon...
person animelover
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ya know, cliffhangers like this are hazardous to one's health ... dang! i'm glad sasuke got busy but he's gonna be sure i'll bet. oh, and i'm really glad the boys are back to normal adn real curious how you're going to have them explain what happened to everyone else. hmmmmm ...

person Setsu
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I really hope you update soon ^.^ I like what I'm readng so far. Its well written, interesting, and yaoi! ^.^ great job so far I can't wait to see what happens next! Ja till next chap
person Black Dragon Queen
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
From the odd friend of Kallipso... ARE YOU TELEPATHIC? OMG! I LOVED THIS! I WAS JUST TELLING KALLIPSO OF MY IDEA OF SASUKE AND NARUTO IN LOVE BUT NARUTO BOUND TO GAARA THROUGH THE DEMON BLOOD ENDING IN A TRHEESOME! EEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKK~! 3-SOMES! YAY! *does a happy dance* Oh my GOD! I love this 3-way pairing! It's absolutely my favorite because I can just SO see something like that happening and I rarely find any fiction for it! I love this story! I love how they're *ahem* busy and everyone else is like "We're under attack! Run!" But all it is is Gaara and Naruto getting down and dirty! Oh, Poor Kankuro and Temari, I think they may be traumatized for life when Gaara returns with not 1 but TWO lovers! Both former enemy's and Leaf Nin's to boot! Hah! Oh, I hope all three of them stay together. It would just make my day. ((However I understand if you have it set up where it was Just Gaara helping Naruto out during a *snicker* hard time and it becomes just a SasuNaru. )) Oh, I can't wait for the next update! I was so happy when I arrived at the computer lab and Kallipso said you had updated and that I was going to "Go ballistic" when I read the new chapter. And she was right, I did. I think 90% of the people in here are ready to lynch me for all the giggling! and Snickers. and gnauffs. and table pounding. Oh! I love your style! Please Keep it Up! TO EVERYONE ELSE OUT THERE! REVIEW! NOW! Must... have... MORE... *Starts convulsing from lemon withdrawal.* Lemon, must have lemons! Must see everyone's reaction when they realize what EXACTLY all those Chakara energy waves REALLY are... ^0__________~^
Happy Writing!
BDQ
person Meb
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, your fic is wonderful. I enjoy reading it, even with the breaks that are almost like mini cliffhangers runnin around in the story :). Not to mention the big cliffie at the end :P
person polite
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhh you tease. I was expecting a little more reaction than that but it works. It he going to except?
And how come Gaara isn't jealous?