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damn those 2 are non-stop! lol i feel sorry for naru's cute ass. hope kyuubi plans on healing him after he expended all his energy because he gonna be hurting for days after this. looking foward to your next update.

hiya! i'm "new in town" and just found your story. don't know how i missed it before.
it's gives a whole new slant on the narugaa thing. awesome! but when are the lovebirds going to return to their senses? i'm waiting for some conversation, and please let it be before the entire planet catches them. actually, that would thicken the plot hmmmmm, but naruto would be so BUSTED!!! especially with the atkatsuki on the way. anyway, if you ever need a push to update, just send me a line (or if you have this complete story hidden somewhere, let me know that too!) :)

Wow, this affliction sounds bordering on traumatic, poor Naruto! You mentioned a threesome earlier, that wouldn't have anything to do with Sasuke and Kiba going off with Naruto on a mission would it? I;m starting to get a little worried, Sasuke.. ok, but Kiba.... Anyway, we'll see, great chapter not at all blegh

Ooooh, niiiice, i like! Gaara here we come, love this fic!

Oh my dear sweet god, I haven't read something so utterly mindblowing in a long while, that was completely off the charts, the hotness, ooh the hotness!!!! Fan-blimmin-tastic ;D

lol, now thats what you call a mindblowing orgasm

Wow. This is really a fantastic story. (I just read it all in one shot) While at first, I figured it would turn into a NarutoxSaskueand/orKiba, it totally went into a different direction and I'm glad that it did. The GaaraxNaruto pairing made much more sense as a solution to the problem and I absolutely loved how you made it so that despite no longer having his demon within him, the years of hosting such a powersource has Gaara with somewhat of a merged demonic residual. The backlash of the love making between Naruto and Gaara was also a really cool addition to the story. I mean the demons were supposed to be these gigantic forces of nature and a combination of such energies would certinally have some sort of effect. Very, very cool. The only thing I was slightly disappointed with was that Naruto didn't take control in the second round and top Gaara. I know alot of these stories like to have a definitive seme and uke, but roles like that never made much sense to me in a relationship. I'm not really berating you over it (after all, Naruto is in sort of a heat, thus putting him in the bitch position) but its just a thought that I would have like to have seen made happen. ^^

Keep up the great work. For something you say you originally intended as a short three-chapter fic, you've really developed into something grand. :D

Woot! Sweet chapter! Keep up the work.

great story so far keep it coming

WOW!!

This is amazingly hot and interesting. Thank you.