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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see you continue this. Hope you come back to it. Nice bit of realism with the shock and all.
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For someone who was just a making a lemon, the second chapter made this a decent fanfiction. I hope you continue this story. I would love to see how this turns out.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey you going to finish this or what? I find the story to be pretty hilarious from the second chapter, but you haven't updated in who knows how long. I wanna see how this ends
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gawsh, LAWL!
This is hilarious
but
I hope Sakura comes forward and soon about this
I mean, not taking responsibility
that's just an all time low, even for the "Sakura"s in bashings
and she doesn't seem like a terrible character/person in this fic
so I implore you
not to let her become one
oh
and to update soon
that's very important u_u
This is hilarious
but
I hope Sakura comes forward and soon about this
I mean, not taking responsibility
that's just an all time low, even for the "Sakura"s in bashings
and she doesn't seem like a terrible character/person in this fic
so I implore you
not to let her become one
oh
and to update soon
that's very important u_u
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting story and I am defiantly interested in seeing how everything works out! I haven't laughed that hard in a long time when Tsunade attacked Kakashi like that! It was hilarious! I look forward to future updates!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm. looks good. i like the twist on the mpreg, and naruto's reaction and understanding seems pretty IC. i'm not so sure about tsunade's immeadiate assumption of kakashi's part in this. and naruto kept his promise. he didn't tell! ^_^ he's so sweet, i really hope things work out.~
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love It!!!! Can't wait to read more!! Please hurry!!!!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew it. That was cool. A pregnant Naruto!!! Can't wait to read more.
Rox
Rox
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God C-chan this story is sooo GOOD!!! I couldn't stop laughing until I got toward then the end then it killed me but still an awesome sorry.
I can't wait for the update Heh, I freaking love Kakashi XDDD
I can't wait for the update Heh, I freaking love Kakashi XDDD
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great... couldn't even tell that it was your first het. Anyway, I told you I would read it and review. Now it would be interesting twist for you to write it with their original genders for the second round. What do you think? ;) Or was this a one shot? hehehe.. oh well... As far as being in character, I think it works. Naruto is still rather shy.. heck, he couldn't even shake Gaara's hand... and Sakura clearly has become more forceful. So, I don't think you strayed from character. Besides, this is fanfiction.. hehe