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September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What is this story about? I'm confused... I got to the 5th chapter and I still don't see where it's going.
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this chapter and especially the interaction between kyuubi and naruto i thought they was both in character for the situation. i thought the whole scene was blazin how it started with naruto being so desperate for just a touch from sasuke to when he seemed to have realized something and halted their encounter. i think that ino with her crazy ways as always is hilarious. i wonder though if you will have sakura still have feelings for sasuke and if she will be a thorn in their relationship. i can't wait to see the next update.
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, however I would prefer to see more angry bitchy Naruto, Its so much more fun to see him like that but I get why his mood changed. Anyway I totally agree with you on the writing style, with my own I usually hate it, but sometimes ill think its ok, or good, and sometime ill just love it, but not as often as the others....hehe anyway good job with the chapter, and im so excited for the next one!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must admit this story is awesome. I just saw it today and started reading it. Normally when I see an incomplete story I bookmark it so I can come back when its longer, but I got started and couldn't stop. It was so much fun reading it, and it was a fun spin on what we already know. I enjoyed this story so much, that I think I will go crazy waiting for the next chapter. It was AWESOMETASTIC. Yay I used my new word again! hehe anyway good job keeping it exciting, and I have to admit I like your writing style.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. does the title of the chapter refer to sai or sasuke (perhaps both). i like how you had naruto describe their bond. stopping each other from destroying everthing else around them almost how you would pictur the gods eternally battling (something epic) like sasuke and naruto but actually communicating on a different level. i can't wait to see what naruto does to ino now that he's pissed. i can't wait til the next update.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man Ino is really evil. She scares me.
Can't wait to read more.
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Can't wait to read more.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice naruto sundae. iwonder if sasuke is going to see the picture. i cat wait dor the next chapter.
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cool, can't wait to read more.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your writting style - it's a real pleasure to read! Please, continue! And bring Sasuke in faster! ;)