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Don't take this the wrong way cause I applaude everyone who has the courage to write and post fan fic. but unless your name is Christine Feehan in reality biting off of her story lines and books is weak, please be orginal next time. I would much rather read something you thought up yourself

Well, it was overall a decent story. BUT I will repeat my criticism from before, everything is too synchronized between the nine. It's absurd. Prophecy, okay. That might excuse some of it (but not all), but at the end. All pregnant with twins. All girls. Lord, if I was in a house with that many girls I would shoot them all and then myself. I can't stand most of the female half of the species, especially those between the ages of about 5-25 (which might seem a bit odd as a female myself). Yeah, so I didn't love that 45 girls in one house thing but whatever floats your boat. Either way, it is nice that you finished, an accomplishment not shared by most fanfic authors. So congratulations on that. And you managed to put together a pretty decent story, that entertained many so congrats on that too. I will just reiterate one more time, for the future if you ever decide to do another similar story, avoid the synchronization. The same exact thing happening to a large group of connected people all at the exact same time. It's like 1 brain in a bunch of bodies. If they're not a hive, it doesn't work. It just becomes ridiculous.

Awww... the end is always sad, but thanks for sharing your story! I enjoyed it.

A really great story. I have saved you to my favorite stories section. I never thought I would like a vampire story, but you changed my mind. Great Job!

If the nine get out of this with their kids and their lives, their mates are going to be soooo pissed at them. Love the story and glad to see an update.

Two words....Nerve Wracking! The are going to make me scream if they don't stop taking chances like this! I feel for the fathers thier nerves have got to be raw. Especially Sasuke's!

Words cannot express how much I like this story. I can't believe I almost didn't start it. Thank goodness I did.

Ah... I'm glad you had Tsunade and Naruto make up. And as always, I just love your Sasuke and Naruto interactions. Too cute. And the way the demons can munipulated their mates... hysterical. Can't wait for more.

I love this story. It is just sooo different I have to like it. Keep it up I'll always be here to read it.

Wow, that was emotional...I really hurt for both Naruto and Tsunade but she has a lot of explaining to do.