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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eh, how should I phrase this? I think confused as hell accurately describes how I felt after reading this. Your writing's as good as ever and that's probably why I read the fic til the end. But he plot is ... disturbing to say the least. Where in hell did you find such a poem? No, stop. I take that back, I don't want to know.
Still, this is really good and that probably why I'm so confused; cause I know I don't like the plot.
Still, this is really good and that probably why I'm so confused; cause I know I don't like the plot.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha I read the title and I laugh so hard.....so I'm glad I read this story..love all your work too.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really liked reading this. Wonderful fic dear! XD
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO THEY FOUND EACHOTHER,BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY HE DOESNT SAY HIS NAME IS IT SO BAD?
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually like fics this dark, but I was impressed. I think the only thing it was missing was one more scene of sexual redemption at the end. It didn't feel quite finished to me. Thanks for sharing this.
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Slave
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was different and also very good. Thanks for sharing the story! :)
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing...beautifully written. I loved the little poem that gave you the inspiration for it as well.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn dude, that was incredible! You came up with that whole oneshot from that little old poem?! Wow, you've got talent! : )
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was different. very different and yet i liked it from beginning middle to end. there was not a point in the story where i was like wtf. it was every bit a story that could be found in stores and i thought it was brilliant. great job. very interesting ^_^
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gee! umm hehehe I agree with Word_slave.....i also felt that it was kind of incomplete......the overall fic was wonderful.....but at the end there should have been more diolouge y'know?.......i didn't want to be the only one saying something even remotely negative because it was so good : ] but i saw slave's review and i just hadda say something.....hehehe but look at it this way, you have another review ^_^;