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You know, this is the second time I've read this story. I thought I reviewed it the first time around but I guess I didn't. I adore this story and right after I finish this review, I'm off to read the sequel.

I loved the characters and the interactions between them. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto was just sweet and loving that I was gushing over their interactions.

The twins and the triplets are awesome and just cute! Kaiya, Kaida and Amaya just happen to be the names of characters that I have in 3 seperate RP's from years ago so I'm extra fond of those narusasu babies :) Kanaye and Haruki, they're just sweet.

Awesome job!!

love the story and thanks for offing the crazy bitch around the end!

I have to say, the stories alright; but it lacks interactions with other characters..You don't see other character at all in this story..

The major problems I have with the story is the weird grammar mistakes..I'm not too sure what's wrong with you but it seems like you have the wordings backwords or just outright leaving out words that's suppose to be there or a sentence just don't make sence at all..That's not including your punctuation which also need help..

I'm not sure who'z beta-ing your story or whatever but whoever is doing it, NEEDS a beta for him/her self if that's the best he/she can do...

Overall, a somewhat enjoyable read!! Love the fact that you're a sakura bashing author..Bravo!!!

love it

I like your plot, but you move it too fast and don't give it time to develop. It failed to hold my interest. You lack detail throughout your story, and the AU powers seem more like a god-mode cheat in a game. The grammar and spelling were good considering the average skills I've seen on the net. Don't think that I'm trying to flame you or anything because I'm not. I rarely review, but I felt the need to try and aid you with this story even though it is complete. No written work is truly complete though. There's always room to improve. Thanks for reading my review.

I can't wait till the sequel. I truly loved this story. I miss that its over but things had to end eventually and with a new story you can make it as long as this one or shorter. I will be waiting

omg i luv this story is there going to be a sequal

um....
"Everything seemed to be alright with the village… Well, that’s what he thought. Before the year was up, everything was going to change. For better of for worse, well you’ll just have to find out. END"
You're joking, right? I really hope that wasn't the end because if it was, you didn't resolve anything by adding that last line there. Naruto could just be better at hiding his unhappiness from Sasuke and trying to forged ahead for the sake of his kids... that doesn't really solve anything.
I'm just offering constructive criticism here; I'm not trying to be mean.

i can't wait to read the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow!! I love this story! Can't wait to see what you do with the sequel! Great job!!