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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! little SasuNaru chibis^^ that is the feeling i have^^ just has to be^^
I love your story so far^^ update soon!
I love your story so far^^ update soon!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that the chapter wasn't bad at all. And don't worry you're not the only one who can't write battle scenes. I'm bad at them too. And if you say that you've got the chapters done up to 24 it means that the story won't be ending soon, which makes me happy and excited. I can't wait to see what surprises you've got under your sleeve for it. So Sasuke wants a child, huh? I have a feeling it won't be only one... But we'll see. Update when you can.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. I sense a male pregnancy coming....
Other than that, these were a great couple of chapters! (and at least 10 more to go? wowzers! I can't wait!) Keep up the good work.
Other than that, these were a great couple of chapters! (and at least 10 more to go? wowzers! I can't wait!) Keep up the good work.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Always a pleasure seeing your updates. Hmm Naruto should rest eh. Interesante LOL cool can't wait to see what else you have in store. A little WAFF moment perhaps. Well I look forward to it either way. Ja!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again!!!! sigh I wish I could write like that. I think the fighting scenes you write are good.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am using someone's computer so i couldn't log on but i want you to know that i think your story rocks. i wish i could draw (damn this is one time i wish i wasn't a writer) because i would love to see angel of death naruto and sexysasuke with wings (hot boys with wings are even hotter my own personal belief but perhaps you share it). at first i was skeptical of reading this story but only because i thought it was going to be a itachixnaruto story not that anything is wrong with the pairing i am just a hardcore sasukexnaruto fan (really hardcore). by the way love the sakura bashing. i have to say that even though she is not useless in after the time skip i still don't like her although i do not hate her as much. when sasuke told her off i was like yeah and putting her in the cell was truly brillant. i can't wait to get to the mpreg part of the story because i am curious as to whether you will have sasuke and naruto as angel of death parents (that would be so interesting). sasuke and naruto struggling between parenthood and their duties as angels of death. next time i review i may be able to have my computer up and runing by then so look for ladyronin. thanks for an excellent story and can't wait til the next update.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That were 2 great chapters. The lemon scenes were great. Nice job!! *gives a good guy pose*
Please please please update soon, I really want to know how things end between Sasuke and Itachi.
Please please please update soon, I really want to know how things end between Sasuke and Itachi.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just strarted this last nite. im hooked need to know wat happens next. ^_^ naruto as an angel=hot lol
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! The suspense is killing me ... bring on the Uchiha brawl!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good! I read the whole chapters and i must say that you are amazing!!! The idea you had was absolutely brilliant! I like it really much and hope to read more~~~~~~~~~~~~~8D