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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh, naru-chan's pregnant, inee? in' naru-chan pregnant? cuzza tha kyuubi? inee pregnant? wow. ive been reading too much of teh prizoner of azkaban. the knight bus' drivers' speech habits are rubbin off on meh.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ten! I think you did just fine with the battle scene. They are fun to read and I'm sure a bear to write, so good job! Chapter 24, huh? What more could you possibly have in store for our two love birds (or angels actually)? Please don't have them return to the village too soon .. maybe later if the council begs them. Oh, and I bet Naru's "pregnant" and that's why he's tired, right? ;-)
See ya at the next chapter!
See ya at the next chapter!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy! I am so excited. Finally, Itachi is taken care of. I love your portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto. A worrying Naruto is adorable. Sounds like they are in for a surprise. Can't wait.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah it's good i think naruto is preggos, but i am getting the feeling that they might not be angels of death with their growing child (i am kinda sad about that). i just can't get over how cute a little sasuke and naruto baby would look with wings. i liked the battle scene between sasuke and itachi it was short sweet and to the point. it's nice to see that the epic battle between them only lasts for a little while. instead of being glad and emotionless sasuke is remorseful. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It wasnt crap at all...in fact, chapter fifteen is probably one of my most favorite chapters so far.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only thing wrong with those lemons were that they were short otherwise you did a good job for your first time. Wanna make them longer express what they are feeling how hard the strokes are and things of such. Sorry I think my story has turned me into a perv LOL. I love how I have to go back a chapter to keep up with you makes me almost jealous. I look forward to the next one. Ja!
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sasuke defeats Itachi and lives!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. I love your story.
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
......DAMN!!!! *sigh* why cant i speed up time? then i could have a copy of all the chapters and i could send them to you now in entirety from the future when they are all finished so they could be finished now so i could read them.....does that make sense....? yeah...... again, though, email me when you update!! in case some wierd thing happened and my other review is gone, my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.