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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
two great chapters!, im later reviewing because of work and thanksgiving :P sorry, please update soon!
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! :D
THe fight scenes were remarkably well done and the Kyuubi summons was a great touch. ^^ Looks like Naruto's gonna get his second wish fulfilled shortly, eh? Keep up the good work. I can't wait until chapter 11.
THe fight scenes were remarkably well done and the Kyuubi summons was a great touch. ^^ Looks like Naruto's gonna get his second wish fulfilled shortly, eh? Keep up the good work. I can't wait until chapter 11.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Naruto and Sasuke were victorious. I hope Naurto is okay. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! R U KIDDING?!?!?!?!? The village now knows Naru is alive? Bummer! Oh, well, I guess it serves them all right (most anyway). I'm dying to see how you get SasuNaru out of this little pickle, specifically the village. Oh, and can Hiashi die now? LOL! Thanx 4 the fast upd8s ... c u tomorrow (hint hint!)
U ROCK!!!
U ROCK!!!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!!! pleeaasssssse!!!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Going well so far. I hope the other village's Kage's have sense enought to cut their ties to Orochimaru and run. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know what they say "Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely"! I'm so glad that's not true in Naru's case. Can't wait to see him kick some fanny. Oh, and could he kill Orochimaru slooooooowly adn paaaaaaainfully? ;-)
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. I'm glad that Gaara has finally been introduced (I love him^^). I know you didn't really put too much emphasis on Naruto's feelings on being back in Konoha, but it must have been really hard. And I know that Naruto still thinks that Tsunade sent the ANBU after him to kill him, just wondering when he's going to find out that that's not true. Awesome job, keep writing.
~Misery
~Misery
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like so far. You have an easy to follow writing style which is always nice to find. I still think that Sasuke should not be given the Fourth techniques. They should be kept for Naruto, and Naruto only, given their relationship (at least until Naruto has kids). It feels a bit, I dunno... disrespectful, to take something and to give it to Sasuke (or anybody for that matter). I do like the story though, and despite that little 'meh', I do hope to see more updates from you soon.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another grate chapter! To see that you have updated always puts a smile on my face :) Keep on writing!