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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was a FAST update ... COOL! I say, let the leaf village BURN!!!!! Or at least make them offer some sort of sacrifice. sigh, ok, I know that's probably not in the story, but could you at least make them sweat a little, especially Hiashi? Oh, and while you're at it, turn Sakura into ash or something, ok? LOL!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool! can't wait for more.
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty cool story. I was a little worried at first with the mpreg warning (I've read several and they tend to get a bit silly during and after the pregnancy) but if you keep this up, it looks like this will be a great story. Update soon!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. I've never been one to turn down a good Sakura-bashing story. Her character before the time jump was a loser. I will say, I'm not thrilled with Sasuke learning the Fourth's techniques. I think that's something that should be kept for Naruto and any kids he may have given their personal connection. But I really don't think it's something that should be given to Sasuke. He's gotten enough in the course of the series.
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I'm so glad that Sasuke knows that it is Naruto. I love it when they fight things, people, everything together. Can't wait for the next.
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story!! Thanks for sharing this! :)
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Naruto didn't just kill her. I would have. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww im so glad sasuke finally admits that he loves his naru-chan. i cant wait to see how things go from here. update again soon!!
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this looks good. can't wait to see what's next.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this fic is absoputely AWESOME!!! Dang, this site has sooo many talented authors, and you made my top 10 with this one ... especially when sakura got her puny butt kicked and Sasuke declared his love for Naruto. man, i can't WAIT to see what you do with this one. see ya!