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for The Crimson Angel

by 198027

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue the story. It is very good.
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absoultely love this story!!!! I know we are suppose to vote on either continuing the story or ending it....but perhaps a sequel might be the best way to go. As much as I hate to say this, the conflict in Crimson Angel has already been resolved. However, after reading your plans, I am anxious to read the "rest" of the story. Maybe, it would be best to end Crimson Angel, but begin another story with the new conflict of building their own village. I hope this suggestion helps and doesn't confuse you more on what to do. :)
person fate
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, its a really good story!
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
person monrque
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it would be hard if they moved. would they still be ninja.
who would move with them. what about loved ones. would they be
betraying the village. I know that they have gone through a lot
I am so glad to see you update and i know that you are a wonderful story teller.

and as for life..I will pray for you.
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i never would have thought that you would have made naruto pregnant again. i know he was pregnant as the crimson angel the first time but since it wasn't permanent it didn't effect the kids, but what about this time as he is a permanent angel of death. oh my gosh naruto and sasuke now have five kids you know you have to continue their story in their own village not to do so would proably kill me. i am sorry that things are rough right now and i hope they get better. i can't wait to see the next update.
person nyge98
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue the story. I really love it. I would like to see them start their own village
person Gwyllion
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful ending to this chappie! I squeed when Sasuke looked upon his newborn babies. So CUTE! XD I would love to see you continue this fic. My heart would be sad to see it end so fast. I would love to read more in how Naruto and Sauke get along when taking care of the kids. That would be adorable! Please keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more from you!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I highly enjoy this story, but with that said, I wouldn't be opposed with you ending the story here and now, rather than allowing it to drag out and grow stale.

Its something to think about anyway. At this point in time, there really is no more conflict and the story is already told. Each new chapter is just follow up filler on Naruto and Sasuke's ever growing family. Sure, they could work towards creating a new hidden village, but why? What would really drive them to it other than just growing tired of Konoha. Plus, wouldn't breaking off put them at war? I dunno. It seems pointless.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed your story so much and would LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEE it if you kept it going a while longer.