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Oh, this story is just the best! In other words I love it! Oh, how I wish that Naruto and Sasuke could just get married and have children in the real story. But you twist of things sure is good, so POST SOON OR I GO MAD!!! or something like that. ^_^

He's pregnant again!?!?!? O__O Kami-sama they must've been productive.

Great story.
update

yea, sakura and hiashi are GONE and about time too! sorry i'm a little behind in the reading and just got caught up today. awesome! they're going to kiss konoha goodbye, so the question remains is hiashi going to go for revenge?

aww naru-chan is preggy again congrats and hiashi damn him damn him to the pits of hell him and that smug look *bleh*. ok so hurry and update so i can review again and tell u how much i adore this fic and u as a writer ^_^

i am so glad the you updated i love story.

Please let them stay (the kids need others to be around)

thanks for making my night

about time the wench got wat she deserved and ooohhohh i cant believe she killed their baby. poor naru first postpardum and now this our blonde ninja cant take no more pain well at least not right now. sasuke u better take care of him ^_^. cant wait to read more and ur doing a good job dont let nobody tell u wrong. its ur story, ur writing style and they can F*ck off. keep doing u ^_^

*bows and kowtows* THANK YOU, not just for killing that annoyance and putting an end to the monotony but to use her to forward the plot. I'm still surprised that Sakura had lasted this long and the times I've rolled my eyes saying 'Here we go again' but hey, no more complaints now. I love the angsty plot twist of the death of Naruto being pregnant again then having the miscarriage. I'm all for angsty stuff. Now that the annoyance is out of the way I hope to see what more and more complicated obstacles start to unfold for our unfortunate couple and maybe a little fluff about the wedding too. :D Ok, I know I'm nitpicking but considering that this is Adultfanfiction and we're all 'supposed' to be adults on this site or at least expecting smutt, it's not really necessary to put in authors notes stating that the lemon is coming and when the lemon ends. I used to do that when I first started writing fanfiction and that's always been because I was nervous but when I did stop putting author notes in the middle of the chapter, I got a lot of encouraging reviews for my smutt writing. :D Anyway, I'll stop here for now so I don't go off into a tangent and write another essay. I hope to see an update from you soon though take care. ;) Madyamisam

THANK YOU!!!! FINALLY!!!! OMG, SAKURA FINALLY DIED, THAT BITCH!!! *sigh* w/e. shes dead now. BUT SHE KILLED THE NEXT BEBBIE!!! DX

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honestly, i don't care whatever happens to sakura since every story i read mostly got her bashed as spoiled brat, pink leecher etc ^^ . ookaayy, maybe i'm getting veeryy used of that situation. i also read one which she killed herself because she couldn't accept the facts that she couldn't get sasuke. so, if you feel that you treated sakura very badly and felt guilty, maybe can get her lost her memory or something if you don't want to end her character.

cheers ^^