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honestly, i don't care whatever happens to sakura since every story i read mostly got her bashed as spoiled brat, pink leecher etc ^^ . ookaayy, maybe i'm getting veeryy used of that situation. i also read one which she killed herself because she couldn't accept the facts that she couldn't get sasuke. so, if you feel that you treated sakura very badly and felt guilty, maybe can get her lost her memory or something if you don't want to end her character.

cheers ^^

Can't you send Sakura to Suna or something to get rid of her???? I personally don't mind the bashing. It's fanfic after all and I think all fanfics are written in the perspective of the writer. So if you want to keep up bashing Sakura that's your choice. I still think the story is GREAT!!! So my personal opinion: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!

I'm not real fond of Sakura to start with however I think that her fan-girlism would drive her over the edge when she found sasuke to be gay, specially since with 'inner sakura' she doesn't seem exactly stable in the first place. also I think that it should be completely your decision as it's called creative licence. this is your story not anyone elses and no one should tell you, or attempt to tell you, how to write it.

Reaper

Hahaha fuck that!! BASH HER MORE! It's awesome. Seriously... Sakura is totally, secretly like that. If Sasuke ever knocks up Naruto. Like woah!! Watch out.

i wish sasuke would have tortued her the first time he went to visit and not because i hate sakura but because she killed their baby, any parent would do that. i so love this story and i hope that youhave a nice christmas and look forward to the update (it will be like a christmas present).

Sasuke did do the right thing. Sakura killed their child for goodness sake. Tsunade was too leniet with her punishment. Life imprisonment? Oh yeah, that's punishment fitting the crime, NOT! Please continue!

Don't mean to sound mean but I think Snowcat has made a very good point. The only people that will still enjoy what you've done with Sakura's character are Sakura haters. For the rest of us the bashing has gone on long enough. Ok it was funny the first couple of times in the chapter or two but the joke is running dry. In terms of story writing, it's overdone and to be quite frank, boring because you're obviously not planning to develop Sakura's character in anyway. Since you've killed off pretty much most of the villans in the first few chapters I'd have figured when I read about Sakura and her attitude, I was wondering if you'll be making her into a real villain to complicate the relationship of our protagonists along with Naruto dealing with his depression. I hoped you would make her into a manipulative bitch that'll put some real strain into Naruto and Sasuke's relationship but after 20+ chapters of "Sasuke!" Glomp. Smack. I would be ready to call it quits on reading this story altogether. Had it not for the fact that you've made a good plot and a cool OC like Kuro and possible villain out of Hiashi. I really would have given up on reading this. It's not that I've got no sense of humour. I'm all for some lighthearted fluff and a joke now and then to break up the angst but a "running gag" does not belong in a story that raises serious issues such as rape, Post-traumatic stress and depression. Since you're asking for an opinion here it is.

Looking back on hindsight, if you had asked this question about 15 chapters previously. I'd give you the following options...
1) Develop Sakura's character and make her a really nasty, manipulative villain. i.e. she cleverly breaks Naruto and Sasuke's relationship through lies and deceit.
2) Develop Sakura's character and make her a reformed character... i.e. make her a better person by allowing her to see the error of her ways and she ends up being Naruto's best friend and confidante whenever he and Sasuke hit up a snag in their relationship.
3) Kill her

Looking at the story now after 22 chapters, you have only have one real option in my eyes if you want to redeem this story.

1) Stop character bashing (Leave that to your readers and the anti-Sakura forums) and give her some bloody character development immediately. Preferably in the next chapter or the next time you decide to write about her. You can kill her off at some other point but because she's still here after 22 chapters at this point she's an eyesore that won't go away by simply killing her but you'll end up damaging your story even more if you keep her the way she is now.

I don't mean to sound negative in this review but I only give reviews because I honestly like the story, otherwise I would not even bother wasting time typing about a piece of crap. I like the concept of the Black Angels. I love Kuro, I like to know more how Naruto's going to cope with the depression. What Hiashi may be scheming (since he certainly seems like a villain in this). The only thing that irks me is and I think is ruining an otherwise good story is your Sakura bashing. Not because I'm a Sakura fan (I don't even like her) but purely because it's pretty much the same thing over and over again. You might as well have copied and pasted a paragraph of her getting her ass kicked by Tsunade/Naruto/Sasuke/whoever from a previous chapter into your next update. Anyway these are my thoughts on this. Looking forward to reading what's gonna happen next however, I'm just going to scroll past anything that has anything to do with Sakura unless you're actually gonna be doing something different with her. Madyamisam

Hmmmm....Sakura...The chick is INSANE. I was wondering why she wasn't locked up and was kind of waiting for her to go the ninja version of postal on Naruto. Her character is kind of pitiful, but hey - it is your story! You are the god of your little alternate universe. There is no reason to threaten not to read the story, just express oppinions gracefully, and find something else to read. The writing of the story belongs to the author, we readers are along for the ride.

heck no torture sakura til you send those fuzzy pink strands til the end. i don't think that it interefers or in any way misses with the storyline, but it is funny as hell (everyone should always appreciate the punching bag). please continue the story the way you planned because so far i have really enjoyed it.

In all honesty I don't hate Sakura either, she's definitly not my favorite, but I don't think that your fic is ruined because you've made her into a raging nut case. First it's your fic and I think you should do whatever you want with it. Second this is fanfiction, it don't have to be like the Manga; that's the beauty of writing fanfics. Third I personally feel that flames are stupid and pointless; if you don't like the story don't read. Great fic btw and nice fan work that was done for your story, the artist has good talent. Don't let a bad review get you down. Just keep doing what your doing; many people are enjoying this fic.