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for The Crimson Angel

by 198027

person monrque
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think that maybe you could give her some happiness. but i dont care either way
person mls
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the stor as is!! i like that sakura is crazy!!!
person LadyWolf
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I say just put the pathetic girl out of her misery. She needs to move on. either leave the village for some training, maybe a connection the Hokage has and come back as a better person. Or, I hate to say it kill her off....Or find someone else for her to love.....
But regardless of all the Sakura bashing, I still love reading this story, please keep it up.
You definitely will get some bad reviews but so what? Everyone is entitled to there opinion. And if they stop reading it because of that then their lost because they are missing a good story...

Keep it going!!!!!!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I don't like Sakura, so bash her all you want to!!!! Besides, this is your story, if someone doesn't like the way you are writing it, then they can go write there own! Unfortunately, you will never be able to please everyone, it just can't be done. So stick to what you want to write and the people who like it will continue to read. PS. I love your story and I hope that you don't change a darn thing about it! :)
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First and for most, it is your story. Do as you will. I personally like the change in Sakura. Because it's a side not everyone sees in Naruto characters.

Secondly, each person has their own opinion. You can either take it to heart, or let it go over your head. Your choice.

I will continue to read either way.
person lolyah
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh for God's sake, people are people, whether weird or crazy but still people. When I was writing fics I got loads of flames about my story, some said they sucked, some said quite a lot... some were generous of saying why it sucked, some refused to even if I asked them why. That's just life.

Having no flames is having no success. Once you get flames, you get success.
person Hige
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lolz.. I do hate Sakura a LOT more than... more than... gah! i just hate her...

but i'll pretty much agree to ms.reviewer... not about the 'not reading the story anymore' but the sakura bashing.
If removing that part of Sakura would ruin the plot that YOU wanted for the story then please do continue... I suggest that you just lessen it a bit? Cause I must say it's hard to change the plot once you've already planned everything.

Sorry for lurking for 22 long chapters... and just reviewing now... but i'll stay with ya till the end.

Good luck with the future chapters

and keep it up! ^.^
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I'd like to see you force a change in Sakura's attitude. I'll be the first to say that Sakura was a pathetic Sasuke-chasing blind moron in the first half of Naruto but after the time skip she did grow up and become likeable so it would be nice to see her mature in your fic as well. But if you don't think you can make her tolerable in this fic then kill her but in a way that sorta redeems her, like her defending Naruto's children from an assassin or something.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't care which you chose. I'm like both ideas.
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naruto say yes say yes! oh im sorry jumpin ahead lol. neway i think hiashi needs a good spanking from tsunade or at least an ass kicking from naruto. i luv the way u hav sasuke showing his emotions in subtle ways it fits him well. cant wait to read more and happy holidays 2 u too^_^