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for The Crimson Angel

by 198027

person Anon
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope this if best for the four of them, going back to Konoha. Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
http://kaarnishia.deviantart.com/art/The-Crimson-Angel-71845992

^^ Hope you like it, yo. I want to do another one for you too. I have all of these ideas now since the babies were born! ><;; Must draw more! Wonderful chapter, dear. Yay for twins! But that sucks that Naru lost his wings. T_T
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There's drama coming? Oh noes!!!

I wonder how much longer Sasuke has to work as an angel of death? Anyway, cheesy perhaps, but another enjoyable chapter none the less. Keep up the good work! ^^
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad thse two have made up. Don't worry Sasuke, only 6 more months to go then Naruto will be back to normal. Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How cute!! I bet Sasuke's happy the kids are finally here and no more moody Naruto! Hooray!! Can't wait to read the ending!
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was alright, the sap brought tears to my eyes and the thought of a beat up sasuke and a pased out sakura brought laughter to my mouth. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh... so darn beautiful! I'm sad about Naruto not being an angel of death anymore. Does that means he's a stay home mommy? Oh, and your descriptions of Sasuke and Naruto's reactions to the babies were beautiful. Good job. Looking forward to the next.
person despairs
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah the babies sound so cute! I'm glad they are ok....i secretly hoped Naruto would have twins and that one would be a boy. Why does Sasuke get to stay an Angel and Naruto doesnt? I agree that is sad...BUT i can understand since he has to take care of the babies now. He wont be able to do missions eh. And Sasuke is still strong to protect them if need be. Well, good job and as usual i'm looking forward to reading more! :D
person Amy
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crimson Angel is the best fanfic i've ever read.
Dispite son spelling/grammatical erors.
person animelover
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww, po l'il naruchan is preggers ... *sniffle* this is so cute, and he's even having cravings with mood swings. PERFECT! why can't more guys get pregnant just for the experience? LOL! The way you portray naru while he's pregnant is awesome. oh by the way, did sakura get killed off or put in an asylum so she won't threaten the baby? hmmmm ... oh well, let's see what else you got up your sleeve. ;-)