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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... so cute! Gotta love an emotional Naruto. It's all the better because Sasuke is so not emotional that watching him stand there petrified is priceless. Can't wait for the next.
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December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was a nice little filler chapter. i have to say i love this story and the direction that you seem to be developing the characters personalities (preggo emotional naruto is a riot). i can't wait til the next update.
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story makes me happy in my soul. I adore the idea of them having wings and I would be honored to draw them for you if you wish. I've also noticed that as the story progresses that your writing style improves as does the amount of character development. The plot is well crafted and I look forward to reading more! Tee hee, Naru is preggers. >3
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter. i am glad mother-hen iruka and grand-ma tsunande are on the way. i didn't think this chapter was all that angsty and if that was what you were going for then this wasn't it. but i like the way that you ended up writing this, i hope you continue in this same vein if it was unintentional. sometimes it is slick when everything isn't always so hard (although if you come up with some hardcore angst i just want to say bring it on). i can't wait for the next chapter.
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Our little Naruto is going to be a mom, how wonderful!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I even had a few good laughs, thinking back at the time my sister was pregnant. I remember the cravings very well. Odd combinations on the most ridicules times. I feel sorry for Sasuke hi hi hi. Can't wait for the next update.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome. Silly summoning frogs... it's just impossible to find good help now adays.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!
Awsome!!
I Love It!!
The Last Time I Read It Was About At Chapter 5!!
You Added More Chapters!!
I Want More Pleaz!!
The Story's Awsome!!^^
(I Think I Was LitaKino77 Of Whatever>.>FLOLF!!Awome!!)
Awsome!!
I Love It!!
The Last Time I Read It Was About At Chapter 5!!
You Added More Chapters!!
I Want More Pleaz!!
The Story's Awsome!!^^
(I Think I Was LitaKino77 Of Whatever>.>FLOLF!!Awome!!)
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Hokage is just being mean not telling Iruka. He is going to be an emotional mess by the time he gets there. Good chapter.
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is going now? Hurry with the next chapter!!