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for To Love and be Loved

by ringpop

person sameyler
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. well heres something for you ifound its so cute.

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/penny_k34_2/SasuNaru_Neko_Luff_by_shadowkatz.jpg
person vixenia
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o where are you reposting the story. please send me the link. www.maggieschoeff@msn.com
person Sayuri
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=/ That sucks. I don't really know why you'd be so fussed if people came over here to read instead of there, and since there's people here who might not necessarily want to join the other place. I think you've made it more troublesome for yourself and others, and maybe you've lost some readers. *shrug*
person renee
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am really liking your story. i have seen this in other storys and i was wondering if you could tell me what teme and dobe mean
person taiintatsu
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey is cute story i love it hope you can update soon i would to know if you can email me or something to be updates with your story thanks
person Kayo
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Still confused about the rejection! And confused about the kit! But I don't care, cuz they're all so cute! Here, I'm trying to fulfill that 24 review quota, but omg! I want another update! I know, I'm greedy. It's cuz they're nekos, I can't resist. (and so full of of lovable, complicate goodness!)
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
before I start the review:

...*moment of silence* I feel like smacking my

forehead all of a sudden. It wasn't until you said

"read my other fics!" that I realized that I haven't

read your other fics yet! :o But, it's all good cause

now I have something to do inbetween updates!!

x3 *absolute glee* (I'm really supposed to be

finishing my own fic, but I can't help it once I'm

absorbed into a story! ;o; )

actual review:

"I don't see a place to sit." Shikamaru managed to

mix a yell and laziness together into the same tone,

over the blaring music.

-kee hee...he's multi-talented XD-

Sasuke was shocked. That guy was about thee

ugliest thing he'd ever seen.

-lmao! Oh cosmos...I had a difficult time trying to

hold back my laughter in order not to wake up

everyone in the house.

Somewhere in his head he thought that this wasn't

right, that he should just let love take its

course.....but god damn! Love's course was taking

too damn long!

-I'm right there with you Sasuke! ...wow, I'm

surprised how much I like Sasuke in this fic. I

usually always take Naruto's side! And I realized

that just now...I'm kind of shocked.-

Sasuke ran into the young boy and comically

flipped over him a few times, landing face first in

the dirt a few yards away.

-*winces* Ooo, that's gotta hurt. Poor Sasuke,

he's having an awful week. -

Sasuke stared blandly at the young boy's bright

orange shirt and white shorts. "We've got to take

him to KitCare or something!" Sasuke continued

to back away.

-It's the orange shirt, isn't Sasuke!? Don't look

down on the kid just because of his choice of

clothing color! XD-

"Naruto…" Sasuke drooled. Wait…..someone else's thick hard cock! "NARUTO!"

-PFFT! Ha ha ha ha...Stay in reality, Sasuke...get that mind outta the gutter. x3 Of course, I'm one to talk...-

Yay! Another excellent chapter! LOL! I love how that kid materialized out of nowhere, but since he's helping move the SasuNaru along, I don't care how he got there! XD Come on Sasuke...take a closer look at that kid and see what Naruto sees~
person Damp
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto stared at his friend daunted and dejected for a few seconds. "Fine." Naruto said, getting himself up off the ground and walking towards the confused little boy, hoisting him up like a log between his hip and arm. "I'll just become a host and make enough money to support the both of us by myself!" Naruto huffed, turning and walking away, the kit in his arm giggling happily.
Sasuke's eyes glazed over at the images of a naked willing Naruto sprawled out on a bed with the sheets rumpled beneath his tan sweating body and him laying there erect, all sexy, waiting for some thick hard cock to pound him into the mattress. "Naruto…" Sasuke drooled. Wait…..someone else's thick hard cock! "NARUTO!" Sasuke ran to catch up with the fleeting teen. "Naruto!" Sasuke grabbed Naruto's elbow.


Smart Naruto, seme's can't stand it when their property is taken from them or used by another >XD.

-Damp
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story cant wait for next chapter plz i beg u can we have lemon'
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is intriguing...kiba's hateful... and Naruto and Sasuke are so cute!!! ^.^ Wonder who's the kid...??? nyah!!!!!