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for To Love and be Loved

by ringpop

person Word_Slave
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do like this, but I was disappointed at how Naruto treated Hinata and sulking. That's why I didn't reveiw the last chapter. I know, I'm pathetic, but I like the Nice Naruto better... oh well.
Slave
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not as fiesty as I would like to be but I really HATE that damn Rhianna song it makes me wanna slap her in the back of the head. But your story I am liking. I think the ears and tail are adorable. I am a little confused because Sasuke seems a little effeminate. But I am sure whatever you have planned will be good. I would type more praise but lately I just have been down in the dumps. I look forward to your updates I am sure they will be able to bring at least a smirk onto my face. Ja....
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This could be so totally interesting. The different directions this could go is fantastic. I hope this is going to be a full length story don't shorten it for anything!! Oh the angst!!
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zee Zee! update!!

Or I'll kill you!! *death stare*

Jokin!! I love youuu!!

xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
person nyan3
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Moarrr? *purr* =^.^=
person animelover
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so cute!!!!!! And I absolutely love your humor. you know, the "by the way, did i mention both males and females can have kits?" thing; oh and sasuke's self talk when he's checking naruto out. hehehehe! so is this going to be a sasunaru with some nejisasu mixed in for angst? geez, i hope so. LOL! i'm down and all that with the waff but ya can't have a sasunaru without a touch of angst. awwww c'mon, just a little? oooh, and maybe some lemonade with that? ;-)

well i anxiously await chapt 3; drop me a line when it's up and ready! see ya!
person inuyashalove04
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how you have the story going. I especially like how you've made everyone have ears/tails. I can't wait to see what happens next!
person blueh
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wee!! You have my interest!! Naruto is so cute! He's got ears and tail! I just wanna glomp him. And I love Sasuke's character! *melts*
person Kang
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oKaY, b*tch, here's you're review! now hand over chapter two! haha, nah, seriously, the characterization is pretty off base, but the writing style is moderately competent and the story premise is cute, so Kang has decided to Approve and ask for continuance, since you have pleaded for validation. ::hands cookie:: i look forward to more!
person O.o ...your face... o.O
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT Kitteh peoplez!
meow
*is easily amused*
anyway i like the background story, not just with the chocolates buts the rain as well, i found it rather... fascinating... buuuut maybe im just a loser.
Hope this goes far!