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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tis too cute!!
I loves it already... And that is like my EXACT impression of hinata, hahaha she annoys the #@%*ing crap outta me, *ahem* must stop the potty-mouth now and probably go to bed.
Ja-ne!!
*falls asleep*
*dreams* You're mine Naruto! *shifty eyes* *yoink*
I loves it already... And that is like my EXACT impression of hinata, hahaha she annoys the #@%*ing crap outta me, *ahem* must stop the potty-mouth now and probably go to bed.
Ja-ne!!
*falls asleep*
*dreams* You're mine Naruto! *shifty eyes* *yoink*
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please spell umbrella right
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(DON'T KNOW Y THIS STUPID SITE KEEPS ON CUTTING MY REVIEWS sorry if I have to write it on two different reviews, I tried to write it 5 times but it cuts it when the blackmailing line...)
hello! as I usually do with every single one of your works, I really like your story! It's cute and fluffy.
Normally I'm an Hinata's lover, but I guess Naruto was pissed with the rain soaking his ears(this is sooo cute!!), so I think I can forgive him. :)
oh, and the line with the 'umbrella-ella-ella-ey-ey-ey' thing made me laugh my ass off! keep on updating! (btw, that blackmail with the '20 reviews' thing was mean >_<)
nah, just kidding! (but it WAS mean!^,^)
anyway, good job and please update soon! bye
hak.
hello! as I usually do with every single one of your works, I really like your story! It's cute and fluffy.
Normally I'm an Hinata's lover, but I guess Naruto was pissed with the rain soaking his ears(this is sooo cute!!), so I think I can forgive him. :)
oh, and the line with the 'umbrella-ella-ella-ey-ey-ey' thing made me laugh my ass off! keep on updating! (btw, that blackmail with the '20 reviews' thing was mean >_<)
nah, just kidding! (but it WAS mean!^,^)
anyway, good job and please update soon! bye
hak.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(continuing from precedent review) (...)
nah, just kidding! (but it WAS mean!^,^)
anyway, good job and please update soon! bye
hak.
nah, just kidding! (but it WAS mean!^,^)
anyway, good job and please update soon! bye
hak.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... that was so cute! I loved Sasuke thinking about his and Naruto's "kits" and not being able to do the same with Neji... ah, take the hint Sasuke. And Naruto's reaction to Hinata... priceless.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In chappie two, did you happen to watch Rihanna's umbrella video love that video. It's the only thing I can think of for umbrella-ella-ella-ey-ey-ey, made me giggle and laugh a little ^-^. Awesome chappie though.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off I just wanna say that this story is too adorable for words and I look forward to the whole thing ^_^
Second I wanna say to not worry what those flamers are saying. I think it's adorable that you have them with tails and ears. You don't get that often. Plus I can see Naruto that way lol. This is your story and you write however you like it. ^_^
I am in love with this story and it's only been two chapters (you have quite the writer's talent hun)
You are very unique and have your own style which is a big plus =) (tons of cookies for you)
Keep up the awesome work
ur doin great =)
Look forward to the next update
Lots of Love
Ja'ne ^_^
Second I wanna say to not worry what those flamers are saying. I think it's adorable that you have them with tails and ears. You don't get that often. Plus I can see Naruto that way lol. This is your story and you write however you like it. ^_^
I am in love with this story and it's only been two chapters (you have quite the writer's talent hun)
You are very unique and have your own style which is a big plus =) (tons of cookies for you)
Keep up the awesome work
ur doin great =)
Look forward to the next update
Lots of Love
Ja'ne ^_^
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I forgot to mention
I just love how you did that whole umbrella thing from Rihanna's song
That was awesome XD
Ur doing great =)
I just love how you did that whole umbrella thing from Rihanna's song
That was awesome XD
Ur doing great =)
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
20 reviews before you post a chapter... you chest high my girl. Neway, the story premise is cute and generally speaking i'm a fan of your writing so we'll see if it turns into one i'll love.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kind of feel sorry for hinata, but if Naruto isn't interest then there is nothing to do but move on.
Anyway great chapter can't wait to read more.
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Anyway great chapter can't wait to read more.
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