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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOh, I like it so far! Please update as soon as you can, you got something good here :D!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This may be short, but it was oh so sweet.
Were Sasuke and Naruto friends at one time? The first chapter wasn't very clear on that point but when Naruto thought about wanting to be the one to make him smile again, wanted to be the one to make him laugh and etc. And if so, will that be mentioned in later chapters as to why their friendship didn't last?
This is an interesting way to kill of the Uchiha clan without it being murder.
I really like this and I am looking forward to your next update.
Were Sasuke and Naruto friends at one time? The first chapter wasn't very clear on that point but when Naruto thought about wanting to be the one to make him smile again, wanted to be the one to make him laugh and etc. And if so, will that be mentioned in later chapters as to why their friendship didn't last?
This is an interesting way to kill of the Uchiha clan without it being murder.
I really like this and I am looking forward to your next update.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice start...though the neko thing i'm not so sure of...please post more soon, it's very promising so far
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning! I can't wait to see where you take it. The Uchiha's dying of chocolate was funny, quite a bit different from mass murder! ;) Can't wait for the next.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually like the ear thing, but I love the characters! More soon please
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooooo! You go Naru-chan! Thats some awesome story you got set up!
*pats on back* well done with the disease-y-ness...
heh heh heh... O.o ... imma freak i know...
ANYWAY! do you myspace?
if so mine is at, www.myspace.com/ratsushi
wooo! ratsushi! (dont ask... or ask if you REALLY want to... i dun mind)
Ja-ne darl!
*pats on back* well done with the disease-y-ness...
heh heh heh... O.o ... imma freak i know...
ANYWAY! do you myspace?
if so mine is at, www.myspace.com/ratsushi
wooo! ratsushi! (dont ask... or ask if you REALLY want to... i dun mind)
Ja-ne darl!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute idea. I can't wait to see what more you'll do with this. Is everyone in this world an animal type? The only hangup that you might need to address is - who in their right mind would give a child access to money so he could blow it all? The age you seemed to make him at that time indicated he was rather young. I dunno..just seems something you might want to fix or explain later. Otherwise, great job!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kawaii!!! you so gotta write more and the fact you use arashi instead of minato is something i agree on. arashi sounds so much better anyways lol. Update again soon!!
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello handsome ransom. here is your ransom.. now give me my second chapter and maybee i`ll throw in a treat next time ;P
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've started off really great! :D Keep up the good work, I'm excited to see the next chapter!