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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahaaaaa~ yanno I'm not one for fluffy lovey dovey SasuNaru. But I've taken a long break from SN fanfics, and in a fit of much needed procrastination, decided to pick out one at random.
I'm quite liking this, even though ears and tails are generic but heeeeeeeeey where would Disney be without generic? There seems to be a decline in furry!SasuNaru of late, so I'm happy you've given them this. :D
I must say though, I'm not a big fan of romance interferences. Stuff like jealousies and other characters getting in on the action. So... I hope there's not going to be too much of this. They can get to become very irritating and somewhat monotonous.
Well I hope this review didn't seem too gripe. Good luck!
I'm quite liking this, even though ears and tails are generic but heeeeeeeeey where would Disney be without generic? There seems to be a decline in furry!SasuNaru of late, so I'm happy you've given them this. :D
I must say though, I'm not a big fan of romance interferences. Stuff like jealousies and other characters getting in on the action. So... I hope there's not going to be too much of this. They can get to become very irritating and somewhat monotonous.
Well I hope this review didn't seem too gripe. Good luck!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first time reading and glad i did,i like his pnamonia comment people do that alot like they always burn even in the winter(though some really do)im glad this isnt one of those angst driven stories were all they really need to do is talk out their 'feelings'as good as alittle angst is too much is sickening.yeah it was a short chapter but it was worth reading hope you update soon
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo kawaii, makes me want to pet both of them and scratch behind their ears. Can't wait for more it's just tooo cute!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohooo... Kisses rock! They are so cute. And I'd loved seeing a little Naruto attitude. Can't wait for more.
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Cuteness
this story is getting more and more adorable...just like you love ^_^
I just loved that chapter you did...it was awesome and filled with kawaiiness. (lots of cookies for you ^_^)
I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work you're doing great. I'm here for you whenever you need me and I'm glad to know you're not giving up =)
email me sometime if you'd like ^_^
can't wait till the next update
lots of love
Ja'ne =D
this story is getting more and more adorable...just like you love ^_^
I just loved that chapter you did...it was awesome and filled with kawaiiness. (lots of cookies for you ^_^)
I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work you're doing great. I'm here for you whenever you need me and I'm glad to know you're not giving up =)
email me sometime if you'd like ^_^
can't wait till the next update
lots of love
Ja'ne =D
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOah. i like the first chapter.
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im sort of a late reader...
haaa.
but whatever.
I PERSONALLY think the cat ears and tail WORK.
i think it's adorableeee!!!
hmm..does everyone have them? or just a few select people?
im a biiigg
Sasunaru fan.
as well as a Shinokiba fan..
and Nejishika
...hmm...OH and a Gaarahaku fan...
^^
AHHH we cant forget Kakashiiruka lovee...
hmm...Kakashi with cat ears...that's sexyyy.
X3
in fact all of the loy lovers should have cat ears!!!!
CAT BOY LOVE!! <3
=^.^="ohhh, and how are you neko-kunnn??"
=^+^="im finee, how about you neko-sannnn"
=^.^="good."
yeah...i talk to myself...or make people talk tyo each other randomly and...ehh
okay
ill shut the hell uppppp
><
but anyways
this is one of my new favoritesss
and even if YOU thought it was short
i liked it
alott
ahh. cant wait fer chapter twoooo!!!!!!!
meow!!
=3
~PaperPlanesCrash
(aka. your new loverrr/stalkerr)
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im sort of a late reader...
haaa.
but whatever.
I PERSONALLY think the cat ears and tail WORK.
i think it's adorableeee!!!
hmm..does everyone have them? or just a few select people?
im a biiigg
Sasunaru fan.
as well as a Shinokiba fan..
and Nejishika
...hmm...OH and a Gaarahaku fan...
^^
AHHH we cant forget Kakashiiruka lovee...
hmm...Kakashi with cat ears...that's sexyyy.
X3
in fact all of the loy lovers should have cat ears!!!!
CAT BOY LOVE!! <3
=^.^="ohhh, and how are you neko-kunnn??"
=^+^="im finee, how about you neko-sannnn"
=^.^="good."
yeah...i talk to myself...or make people talk tyo each other randomly and...ehh
okay
ill shut the hell uppppp
><
but anyways
this is one of my new favoritesss
and even if YOU thought it was short
i liked it
alott
ahh. cant wait fer chapter twoooo!!!!!!!
meow!!
=3
~PaperPlanesCrash
(aka. your new loverrr/stalkerr)
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was so sweet! and you promise the next chap will be longer ... right? RIGHT?????? i don't have any suggestions or constructive criticism for you, sorry. all i can say is YEAH BABY, U ROCK!!!
until next time!
until next time!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PUAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
the umberella-ella-ella ey ey ey
cracked me up sooo
muchhh
i just imagined sasuke thinking that and almost diedd!
ahahah
muchh love for you
^^
im so serious
dont let anyone getchuu down.
this story is great and your writing style is amazing.
and you better own it
no matter what anyone says
i, and PLENTY of other people, like this story
shiieett!
did i say LIKE?!?!?
I a'MEAN LOVE
ahaha
seriouslyyy,
dont lettem gettchuuu DOWN
cause yo'' stroy makes me feel up and happy.
it's absolutely adorable
an d i think ill die of lovin' this story oh so very much
CAUSE IM ONLY ON CHAPTER TWOOOOO!!!!!!!
the umberella-ella-ella ey ey ey
cracked me up sooo
muchhh
i just imagined sasuke thinking that and almost diedd!
ahahah
muchh love for you
^^
im so serious
dont let anyone getchuu down.
this story is great and your writing style is amazing.
and you better own it
no matter what anyone says
i, and PLENTY of other people, like this story
shiieett!
did i say LIKE?!?!?
I a'MEAN LOVE
ahaha
seriouslyyy,
dont lettem gettchuuu DOWN
cause yo'' stroy makes me feel up and happy.
it's absolutely adorable
an d i think ill die of lovin' this story oh so very much
CAUSE IM ONLY ON CHAPTER TWOOOOO!!!!!!!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woahhhh~~~~~~
i loved itt. i just kept reading and readingg
i just finished that last chapter
and to be blunt and honest....
I LOVED ITTT
i feel so giddy and conent with this story now...yet i want more!!
><
it was really cuuuttteeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
i just realized that you stretched out one day into multiple chapters
usually
for me, at least
that doesn't really sit well...
but in this situation
it felt like those chapters went by so quickly!!
i wish there was moreee...
ahahah,
well, im sitting here on the edge of my seat,
you really are an amazing writer
and you reallyreally shouldn't let anyone getchuu down
(:
ahahh
i really do adore this fic and wouldn't even have an iota of a thought
to suggest change
(:
i lovelovelovelove this.
dont change,
be proud,
and continiue!!
ahahh
[no pressure heree]
(((:::
sincerely,
PaperPlanesCrash
p.s.
you can call me by mah special name
cuh's i love you(& yer writing style,& yer fic &....well, yeah, you get it) so much
and that special name isss...
BANGchuu''
:3
chyeah babyyy,
well, in case i forgot to mention this.....
I LUHHH YOUUU!!!!
i loved itt. i just kept reading and readingg
i just finished that last chapter
and to be blunt and honest....
I LOVED ITTT
i feel so giddy and conent with this story now...yet i want more!!
><
it was really cuuuttteeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
i just realized that you stretched out one day into multiple chapters
usually
for me, at least
that doesn't really sit well...
but in this situation
it felt like those chapters went by so quickly!!
i wish there was moreee...
ahahah,
well, im sitting here on the edge of my seat,
you really are an amazing writer
and you reallyreally shouldn't let anyone getchuu down
(:
ahahh
i really do adore this fic and wouldn't even have an iota of a thought
to suggest change
(:
i lovelovelovelove this.
dont change,
be proud,
and continiue!!
ahahh
[no pressure heree]
(((:::
sincerely,
PaperPlanesCrash
p.s.
you can call me by mah special name
cuh's i love you(& yer writing style,& yer fic &....well, yeah, you get it) so much
and that special name isss...
BANGchuu''
:3
chyeah babyyy,
well, in case i forgot to mention this.....
I LUHHH YOUUU!!!!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool can't wait to read more.
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