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for To Love and be Loved

by ringpop

person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh that was so cute. I just love those two together.

I am looking forward to your next update.
person lonelylulaby
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like alot. Sorry I have nothing encouraging to say about this chapter. I'm really sleepy and it's only 11:47. I'll make up for it in the next chapters review.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sweet! Waiting for the next chapter!!
person LadyWolf
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usually wait until the last chapter to comment.....;o) I love this fic, they are so freakin' cute!!!!
I can't wait until you post the next one!!
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute....
person Rosemary
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh! My baby is stressed! *cuddles* we'll have to use some "stress relief" techniques ne? *suggestive smirk*
I drool over the fear of the night... an excuse to sleep with you! (not that i needed one...*shifty eyes*)
More kisses must be shared! Yummy... I must mark that body which is rightfully mine!
So you know... i could be on at all hours soon because i just finished my exams! *dances* now only Years 11 and 12 left to go! ...then uni... damn it all!
Yes, yes, i do realise i am a retard which notices weird things (but i'll only admit that to you, my little naru-chan)
Bye my love!
BTW anyone who happens to disagree with how hot I am in glasses... you suck!

Love S'uke
xoxoxox
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glad to see an apology to Lady Kaze. I was actually enjoying this story but you turned me off so badly with the reaction you had to her cc. I've had my own really bad experiences with nasty authors and every time another one pops up it annoys me. But seeing that you have apologized, I will give you props for that. Most people would move on and pretend like nothing was wrong. So good on you.

On another note, I will say don't be so sensitive. The best writers in the world aren't perfect, that's why they have editors. Criticism isn't meant to insult you or hurt your feelings, or to take you out of your writing, just help you to improve. The true testament to your skill as a writer would be whether you could take something and become better, while still holding on to your personal style. And that's it really.
person Rosemary
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ever notice how corny the reveiw button for this is... seriously darl it says "reveiw to love and be loved" its sooo cute and such a pun... gotta love those puns...
Anyway, MY NARU-CHAN IS SICK!! NAUGHTY NARU HOW COULD YOU LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOURSELF?!
...Now i have to look after you until your fever goes down... *shakes head* ... but days of watching you sleep doesn't seem too bad... *swoons*
person nm1716
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOO, How cute. I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another cute chapter. Poor Naruto, getting a fever like that.

*shameless plug* Read my new fanfic, "Your Blood Is Like Wine To Me" *end*