rate_review Reviews

First off, the story is good and has potential.

I know you're sensitive about your writing....in a way so am i. but i think some of what lady kaze said made sense and getting such a review is a compliment since the person has spent that much time reading you story and looking at it. and some of the suggestions she has made like bouncing your ideas off someone else make sense. The story does seem sort of rushed though...it's just my opinion.

lastly it's sometimes nice to read the recommended stories just for kicks, not to change ur style of writing cos if u did change it then it wouldn't be you. to clear up this review, my 'tone' is not superior and it's pretty bland. and i do love ur story and will continue reading it wherever it goes.

if you don't want criticism but just want reviews add a sentence that says "please give me only compliments and positive insights in your reviews" while asking for reviews because then people will know not to hurt your feelings.
ja na
Taka

you're very welcome for the 'minimal' comments! I'm sorry you're sensitive about the comments but they weren't meant to hurt :-D

I think that this story is pretty good so far, and that it can turn out to be a great story.

Err, I'm pretty sure that what Lady Kaze was saying wasn't a flame or even close. It was constructive criticism, and when it's taken seriously, it can really help the author improve their writing skills, and what author doesn't want that, lol. When I read it, it really didn't sound like they were trying to make you change the way you write at all. I'd love to get reviews like that instead of the ones that are like 'OMG!!! update soooooon please!'.

And the thing about the reviews, I think that Lady Kaze was just pointing out that alot of people write stories only to get alot of reviews, and that that's not what writing fanfics should be about. But since you pointed out that it was to keep a schedule, that might be cleared up now. There are lots of other ways to do that like just updating once a week, etc. But since you want to do it with the whole reviews thing, that's your decision.

Anyway, this is not a definitely not a flame. Just my opinion as a reader of your story, you know? But if you don't want reviews like this anymore, just say not to give you constructive criticism or something.

I look forward to your next chapter.

*does happy update dance* thanx!

This story is absolute sweetness! I need a break from the tragic and a little more love. Thanks

This story is cool!! Hurry with the next chapter!!

I really LIKE the tails and ears...i always have. I like it when they play with their tails when they are nervous lol. Or when they wrap their tails around their mates, either in a loving or possessive way...awww. Anyways, i'm like more than half asleep typin this so i'm sorry if it's stoopid (yes i meant to type it that way)lol. Keep up the good work as usual doll.

Great update. It's so cute how you have to slowly noticing each other... well, in some instances not so slowly ;), but cute none the less. I'm looking forward to the next.

Awww this story just gets more and more kawaii...just like you ^_^
I really love this story
such great talent you have and I am very happy to know you're not giving up ^_^
Keep up the awesome work
you're doing great =)
I look forward to what's going to happen next between Sasuke and Naruto ^_^ (Loads more cookies for you filled with love)
Olive Juice Beautiful!!!!!!!!!
Ja'ne =)

OMG I LOVE IT!!! Please please update soon! *puppy dog eyes*