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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good for you man. Nobody especiallyHinata should have to gp through with that kind just to get some more money.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love it. It dwelves away from the angst ridden, deep, emotional OC stories, people, this is ADULTFANFICTION, lol. But yeah, nicely done, keep up the good work, and all that mess. PEace
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is quite good, most of the stories with good plots on here have really bad typos and grammer but you're pretty good. keep up the good work!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what are you doing??? UPDATE!! its really good so far. update quickyly!! :)
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue soon,and say another fic chapter with kakashi and hinata.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There are way to many run-on sentences in your work. It makes it hard to read the story.
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hm... its actually an interesting premise... but your right, its not very good
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can you make a Naruto/hinata/Hanabi threesome?