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for Those Three Little Words

by lazynara

person pen_name
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know... Now I'm pretty sure I read this and Aurea Mediocritas on ff (hence my inability to review them T_T). This one is really good; simple but still sweet, not to mention IC. I really don't know what to say other than how much I like your shikaneji stories and wish you would write more.
person Tiffany
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! I thought it was adorable!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was really sweet. If I had to imagine Shikamaru saying that, that would be it! I loved it! You didn't over write it, or slip out of character or anything (it was short, but that has nothing to do with that. I've read soo many stories where they fall out of character and they're like 2-300 word stories)!
Ooh, I like the pairing to!
Thanks for the sweet story!
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that's funny...Random passive speach between the two then the attack and then once again words fly. Kind of like Chess, but in its own right a little different.. I love it.
person squeaker
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehehe......shock the lover! I loved it......maybe a sequel?
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good Short and Sweet. Thanks for sharing.
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I adore this. The characterization is beautiful. I wish I could fav it, so I could read it weekly!
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol really cute and it sounded like them..I agree with what the others said:) thank you for writing this..I love Shika and Neji...you should write more cause your good:)
person lo
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute.I liked it.