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for Eyes of Sacrifice

by UrbanPhoenix

person qwerty
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SO GOOD! I really like this story a lot.
update!!!
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow interesting way to use the timeskip.

I am curious about the fox Aya. Who is she, and where did she come from. And also what is Naruto hiding under the bandages. I wonder if he merged with Kyuubi and that is why he is hiding his body. Hmm very interesting.

Anyway, I really like this story. I look forward to your next update.
person cynaga
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Extremely well written and so enjoyable~! :D
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I gave Kyuubi a corporal form... and its stylish!"
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo-hoo!! excellent start!

I can't wait for you to continue it. ^^ Keep up the great work!
person Nefra
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn, I absolutely love it! The first chapter had me laughing my ass off. The way you described Naruto... he's become quite the hottie. I actually wondered if Tsunade was going to kill him when he called her old. And Aya.... *grabs Aya and cuddles* I'm taking this little cutie home with me. But enough about that, I wanna see Naruto kick Kakashi's smexy ass. Update soon. Oh, wait a tick... you tell me when you're updating anyway. Hee hee. I look forward to it. *sits on edge of seat anticipating*

Ja ne!

Nefra
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. I have so many questions, I can't wait for more so they will be answered.
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I'm so excited for this fic!

You're writing is lovely and I love what you've done with the story. I think Aya is by far my favorite part. Lol. Just lovely writing.

I can't wait for updates on this one. I'll be sure to watch for them!
person akume
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting storyline. I do hope you add another chapter soon. Until then.