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I read this one and something stood out to me and that is you dont have the chapter telling how yugito got to konoha in this section although it is on the regular fanfiction website. Other then that this story is good and i hope to read more as you post it.

Where the heck did Yugito come from? I mean, you went from the wave arc straight to the battle while barely touching on the exams. Nowhere in there was there any mention of Yugito until she strted fighting at the gate. Could you please explain the reason for this to me?

more detailed and realistic than I expected. good job

interesting twist on the battle.

I think its kinda cool how Naruto has neither the need or the knowledge to really use the fox's power. The fox's chuckling in the back of his head was a nice touch. :)

You should make Chuckie the killer doll. That would be an awesome puppet.

I have an idea for a puppet this puppet should have four arms that holds four swords and one in his mouth. Kind of like Zolo from One Piece only better. He should have a green bandana on his head, but you can create the rest yourself.

I've been Reading your Naruto stories both here and on FanFiction.net and I've got to say that I liike your work. You add an interesting twist to Froggy-slices story which I admit I also enjoyed. Though honestly I was more influenced by SerpentSannin's story when I decided to write my own Puppet story.

Anyways I just wanted to let you know I like what you're doing and to encourage you to keep up the good work. Also I've got a Puppet for your Puppet Corner, it's actually one I'm using in my Master Of Puppets story. It's not a combat Puppet but I think you'll like it nad if you want to actually use it in your story then you have my permission, just be sure to give me credit. LOL

Raven - A large bird shaped flying Puppet specially designed to acquire subjects to become Human Puppets with minimal risk of damage. It fires poisoned senbon from its wings and is equiped with poisoned metal talons. Its mouth is able to spray poisoned gas while its hollowed body containes specially prepared smoke bombs filled with poison gas. It is most effective when circling over an enemies position and covering the entire area with it's poison so as to neutralize the target swiftly and efficently.

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