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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I always knew Naruto was smart and that was a great plan. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright Naruto! You go boy!!! But, what about the earthquakes? Hury with the next chapter!!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story too, so don't give up on it yet. I hope you write soon.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is great so far....please continue it ^_^
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like how you've got Naruto utilizing his clones for more than just battle. Great chapter ending.
Also, I just wanted to add (since its the first time I'm reading this story) that your last chapter (3) made me laugh my ass off. In addition to its humor, I just wanted to let you know something about that chapter reminded me of the poems of Izumi Shikibu (a Japanese female poet from 1000 years ago in the Heian period). What with the two 'lovers' connecting *ahem* under the light of the full moon, I just had to dig through my bookshelves to find my book containing her poetry and share one with you.
Tell me this does not remind you of Sasuke:
On a night
when the moon
shines as brightly as this,
the unspoken thoughts
of even the most discreet heart might be seen.
(Beautiful poem, eh? Not quite something someone would expect their chapter regarding mutual masturbation would be referencing to, but it fits on a deeper level that would cause such an event to take place. The connection of lovers thoughts via long distances via the moon is a reoccurring theme within her poetry.)
Keep up the good work!
Also, I just wanted to add (since its the first time I'm reading this story) that your last chapter (3) made me laugh my ass off. In addition to its humor, I just wanted to let you know something about that chapter reminded me of the poems of Izumi Shikibu (a Japanese female poet from 1000 years ago in the Heian period). What with the two 'lovers' connecting *ahem* under the light of the full moon, I just had to dig through my bookshelves to find my book containing her poetry and share one with you.
Tell me this does not remind you of Sasuke:
On a night
when the moon
shines as brightly as this,
the unspoken thoughts
of even the most discreet heart might be seen.
(Beautiful poem, eh? Not quite something someone would expect their chapter regarding mutual masturbation would be referencing to, but it fits on a deeper level that would cause such an event to take place. The connection of lovers thoughts via long distances via the moon is a reoccurring theme within her poetry.)
Keep up the good work!
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is there now. What will happen? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting. I laughed when Sakura found out the real reason behind Naruto's sudden act of genius XD Can't wait for the next chapter and good luck with your beta search, I'm currently searching for one as well.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi got to the weapon first! You really write Naruto in character and he found that room like the real Naruto would. :D I hope they can get the weapon out of there safely and I can't wait until Naruto and Sasuke meet face to face. :)
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for those two. Maybe when they meet up, things will get better I hope. Please continue!