rate_review Reviews

Hey there babe, sorry it has taken me this long to review (I can be an oblivious dumb ass sometimes). I really like this fic so far and I'm glad you are continuing it. Your writing style in this story is a lot like my in Absence (scary isn't it). It's got a serious tone to it but with humour thrown in and I love it when fics are written like that. There are a few grammer mistakes (yeah I know it's like the pot calling the kettle black) but as a writer I'm always glad when someone lets me know because I completely suck at proof reading my own fics. Anyway I'm going to stop before this becomes long winded and boring, did I tell you I love this story (yeah like five pages ago, I know I'm exagerating again) ;-)

Hahaha, yeah I believe I said "there are a few grammer mistakes" and yet I wrote my instead of mine. I do believe I'm a hopeless cause.

Oblivious dumb ass round three: Ok I think I'm almost done, sorry brain is a little fried with finals coming up next week. Thanks for deticating your last chapter to me, god how in the blazes of hell I missed that the first time around I will never know. Focus shai focus damn it!! Yep I'm done for now.

it seems interesting but hard to review when not much is going on

im sorry for not reviewing...im lazy that way. but just so you know your on my bookmarks on my comp so keep up the good work, i want to see where this will go. cant wait for the next update.

ahahaha thats funny i like the duck thing
i cracked up at that bit
your good keep going and update.
ja
treasure.

I'm enjoying this story and I think it deserves more reviews because it's great! I hope you continue to write this and thanks for sharing. :)

it has potential, i hope you decide to write it