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for One After Another

by Ashleechii

person Anon
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story line but not great writing
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this could get interesting. Poor Naruto and Sasuke, just when they are blissfully happy stupid Poo-poo Head Itachi has to come and muck it up. Bastard.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! poor naru-chan sasuke save him!

Very cool first chapter.

=)
person Puzzling
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh!!! I can't wait for the next chappie ^^ Rape time ^^
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooo...don't hurt my naruto *cries*
UPDATE SOON PLEZE!