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for Watchful Eyes, Part 1

by xGothXNinjax

person cute-ktuubi-girl13
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for part 2 i looove sasunaru they are soooooooo hot ¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾¢¾ =^_^=
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah! sasunaru lemon! minor spelling errors tho, eg. 'nibbles' and not 'nipples' is in there somewhere and its 'nubs' i figure you want to say not 'numbs' when referring to said nipples :D
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, you got my curiosity, I'll tell you that. Is this going to be strictly Sasuke & Naruto, or are there going to be other pairings as well?
person Dynamo
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm that was a really nice piece. cant wait to see how it turns out^^
JaaNee
~Dynamo
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I can't wait to see how Sakura takes this. I wonder, did Sasuke see Sakura there or not? Keep writing, it's really good!