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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL I love this. It has a surprising happy ending. sweet.
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24: ‘Kay, thanks for the clarification. ^^
Wuh-oh. No knocking? Bad. Hide, guys! . . . . Oh, that’s a cool shot, seeing Sasuke all cool and everything. =) . . . . Nice save, Sasuke. . . . Heh. I can so see the part when he teleports to the training ground and immediately: “YOU BASTARD!!” as on a manga page. XD . . . . “Ace in the hole.” God, that sounds cruel, true or not. . . . “Posed as his ANBU Captain.” Does Sakura not know that he is the ANBU Captain? . . . . Boy, that’s not something you see everyday, Sakura and Sasuke fighting each other like hell. . . . Okay, where did the mental images come from? That was kind of out of the blue. . . . “Trade nights.” I can’t believe Sasuke’s suggesting this so easily. . . . I wonder how Naruto’s going to feel about all this.
I’d be scared too if two competitors fighting over me walked in banged up but smiling. Yeesh. That’s a sure signal that you’re in deep trouble. o_o . . . . Hah. Great line. “BUT I’M THE HOKAGE!!!” XDD
Wow. Comedic ending with Naruto in trouble. Didn’t see that coming. õ_ô
Wha?! M-Preg?! Seriously?! I’m glad there’s going to be a sequel, because there are some unanswered questions in this story. Naruto seems to have some big secret about the Kyuubi.
Wuh-oh. No knocking? Bad. Hide, guys! . . . . Oh, that’s a cool shot, seeing Sasuke all cool and everything. =) . . . . Nice save, Sasuke. . . . Heh. I can so see the part when he teleports to the training ground and immediately: “YOU BASTARD!!” as on a manga page. XD . . . . “Ace in the hole.” God, that sounds cruel, true or not. . . . “Posed as his ANBU Captain.” Does Sakura not know that he is the ANBU Captain? . . . . Boy, that’s not something you see everyday, Sakura and Sasuke fighting each other like hell. . . . Okay, where did the mental images come from? That was kind of out of the blue. . . . “Trade nights.” I can’t believe Sasuke’s suggesting this so easily. . . . I wonder how Naruto’s going to feel about all this.
I’d be scared too if two competitors fighting over me walked in banged up but smiling. Yeesh. That’s a sure signal that you’re in deep trouble. o_o . . . . Hah. Great line. “BUT I’M THE HOKAGE!!!” XDD
Wow. Comedic ending with Naruto in trouble. Didn’t see that coming. õ_ô
Wha?! M-Preg?! Seriously?! I’m glad there’s going to be a sequel, because there are some unanswered questions in this story. Naruto seems to have some big secret about the Kyuubi.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not only that but you didn't ever get to where Naruto admits to merging with the fox, right? i don't remember reading that the first time around.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah! I love this story. hehe. it seemed to abruptly end there, but it was also a perfect ending. i cracked up when i read the last bit.
as a side note, can you add a chapter to your story when you post the sequel? i sometimes miss stories when reading through, and i really dont wanna miss yours. i have firefox, and the add on Story Monitor, and your is right under there, but I dont have a ton of time to check authors out with the shear volume of fics i have saved from this site and others. Story Monitor is my fic lifesaver. *grins*
as a side note, can you add a chapter to your story when you post the sequel? i sometimes miss stories when reading through, and i really dont wanna miss yours. i have firefox, and the add on Story Monitor, and your is right under there, but I dont have a ton of time to check authors out with the shear volume of fics i have saved from this site and others. Story Monitor is my fic lifesaver. *grins*
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story can't wait for the sequel
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Worse ending ever!!! sorry really I just really don't like Sakura.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love your story the ending was fast but good please email me for the second part for the story hope to get it soon ;) thank you
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!
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I'm so excited. I love this story and the ending was great!! "You guys are gonna kill me!" Naruto is so doomed. hehheheheheh hahahahahahahha bwahhahahahahhahahahahha =^^=
Can't wait for the sequel. Although I'm really not fond of the whole mpreg thing, I can't wait till Sakura and Sasuke find out about Naruto's hidden merger. (I wonder if it will affect the baby Sakura's carrying? As far as Naruto is aware, Sakura got pregnant before the merger was complete... He's going to be pretty shocked if the baby comes out with whiskers, fur or a tail. hehe. ) Anyway, keep up the good work! I'll be waiting.
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I'm so excited. I love this story and the ending was great!! "You guys are gonna kill me!" Naruto is so doomed. hehheheheheh hahahahahahahha bwahhahahahahhahahahahha =^^=
Can't wait for the sequel. Although I'm really not fond of the whole mpreg thing, I can't wait till Sakura and Sasuke find out about Naruto's hidden merger. (I wonder if it will affect the baby Sakura's carrying? As far as Naruto is aware, Sakura got pregnant before the merger was complete... He's going to be pretty shocked if the baby comes out with whiskers, fur or a tail. hehe. ) Anyway, keep up the good work! I'll be waiting.
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I seriously hoped it would end this way. I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading the sequel. Thanks
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I really do love this story a lot, but I am so disappointed at the ending. Honestly, Sakura does not deserve Naruto!!! *takes Naruto away and locks him up with Sasuke* There that solves all of my problems! Hahaha! However, this story was well written and I did enjoy it! Looking forward to the sequel!