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for Last Chance

by sakuyalove

person Okami-chan
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No way! Come on you need to update quickly! Awesome chapter by the way! ^_^
person Jen
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance* <( ' ' <) (> ' ' )> <( ' ' )> (_ _) I've been reading this story for a while now and have yet to review. You made me happy with this last chapter but now I have my fist raised and shaking because of a cliffhanger! Nooo!
person ringpop
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Like I do.” Oh! *starry eyes* How beautiful!
person ringpop
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! Oh no how evil to leave it off just like that!!! I know the whole het sex was important but I seriously seriously (I meant it double time hahaha) that Sakura does not get pregnant or else I may have to kill her. Sorry, I'm not a huge basher but more of an ignorer! YAY!! I seriously can't wait until the next chapter and nobody better interrupt the Hokage with his boy!! Imma stand guard for them! Keep up the excellent work!!!
person tash1021
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! NOT A CLIFFY T_T
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, I can't wait for more.
=)
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha... When Sakura was growing up, she always thought it would be with Sasuke. Ah the irony as her first time happens with someone who was thinking of Sasuke too. hehehe



Personally, I don't see why people should get all up in arms about a little hentai. Its all good. ^^ I'm sorta glad Sakura didn't reject him for being the fox vessel. Too many stories make the characters 2 dimensionally bad. Of course, this will complicate things for Naruto as he has to actually sort out his feelings.


Keep up the good work!
person BLN23
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Y U C K .
person Carla_7
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The thought of Naruto & Sakura is disgusting because of how she is.
I think she just likes how good he makes her look.

I can't believe you traumatized us like that.