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for Last Chance

by sakuyalove

person blueh
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke indeed. T.T I hope things will turn out better for him. I mean, since Naruto HAS been dreaming about the raven, I'm pretty sure he'll be alright... right? Haha. I'll keep reading to find out.
person Okami-chan
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squee* What's gonna happen?! Those two boys need to end up together already! I liked Sakura better when she didn't like Naruto. Great job by the way! ^-^
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. The emotional rollercoaster!!!


Sasuke's post-coital bliss was absolutely wonderful. Then his horror at finding out Naruto couldn't remember... heart breaking! I think this is actually the first story I've ever read where Sasuke takes the traditional Hinata pov and puts Naruto's feelings ahead of his own. It makes him so much of a more likable character, more so than even when its presented as Hinata's trait. (She's shy and a push over, and while she might love him, she won't fight for that love either. I can believe her quick to give away in the excuse of someone else's happiness. Sasuke is almost the opposite of her character, which is why it makes the sacrifice that much more meaningful. But I digress.)

Naruto's absolute distress at finding out his heritage has me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to find out what happens. Keep up the great work! ^^
person kit
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...nosebleed...

urm...not exactly what i've been thinking of...(sasuke being the one that got f***ed! instead of naruto ;) )but it's okay...so what's next?...cant wait for the next chap! update soon ne...gotta go take care of nosebleed...hehe
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaawwwwww sasu-bitch is getting jealous *pats sasuke on the back* *sasuke glares death at shikitsune (formally known as death)* great story so far...can wait til the update!! ^-^
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Sasuke! He feels sore and then he even has to watch Sakura and Naruto kissing? :((
That definitely wasn't his day...
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahahahaahahahaa BACKFIRED!!!


Out of the frying pan and into the fire! So much for Sakura's crafty attempts of keeping away the competition. hehehehe ^^
person Okami-chan
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fucking hot! This was definetely worth waiting for. So... Is the drama gonna start now? Great job. I can't wait to see what happens!
person LenaKItsune
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never really liked narusaku but your story is making me feel a little bad for her. I hope you don't make her kill herself or anything :)
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh nice update! I wonder what Sakura will do when she finds out... *imagines the brutal beatings she will at least attempt to do*

Hmmm, I look forward to the next update. Ja ne.