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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute update, demo... HUZZAH for the lemony goodness that is to come! I am really looking forward to that. Keep up the good work, ja ne.
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shikamaru is my god!! LOL XD. That was cute and funny ;). General answers are fine, update soon please :).
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOO!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great last couple of chapters. You did well on the fight scene and loved how Sasuke reacted to it all. The hospital scene was great too. I could just see the two of them lying in beds beside one another and Naruto egging her on. I'd hate to go drinking with Naruto, that clone technique would really screw with your mind while drinking. Sakura really has her hands full with Naruto, he doesn't notice anyone's interest. Can't wait for the Sasuke/Naruto developments. Thanks for the quick updates, your doing wonderful with this story. Keep up the great work. Take care.
littleolmee
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littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay, I can't wait for sasu/naru lemon....update soon!
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an exciting chapter! I loved how it all played out! Very well done and the battle sequences (one of the hardest things to write for many people here) were not only original, but highly entertaining too! I'm so impressed and overjoyed. ^^
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see the aftermath of this battle. Naruto defeats the Hokage without fox chakara? Pure awesome.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see the aftermath of this battle. Naruto defeats the Hokage without fox chakara? Pure awesome.
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, nice update! ^_^ I like how the plot is going. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next update. Ja ne.
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I've reviewed this yet, but I love the story, I think it's great, and from experience I have to tell you a lot of people (probably me included (sorry)) don't review unless there are steamy lemons. But let me assure you, your writing is great! You do a nice job of setting the tone and the fight scene was great, I especially loved Naruto using the fan. That was a stroke of genius!!! More soon?
Slave
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay~ been reading this story for a long time. I'm happy that Naruto beat Tsunade, but are all the villagers gonna accept him as the next Hokage? I'm so excited and I want to see more!!! And I want some SasuNaru action already =P Hope you update soon~
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn its friday...update soon
im love da fight scene...it was exciting to read!!!
im love da fight scene...it was exciting to read!!!